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Winter

Winter is the snow queen with no mercy,
Whose delicate exterior disguised her enmity.
Since Autumn distorted her under Satan's order,
She deeply hid in forest,
Killed longing men she met.

Pretending get hurt, dying for cold,
Winter asked men to bring her home.
Once they revealed lust,
Winter ruin them into rot.

There was a man carrying a bamboo bag,
Dropped into winter's trap as he should.
He carried her into bag,
Walking in forest without a chat.
"Are you cold?" man asked and covered Winter his cloak.
After that, still no chat, no lust, nothing as others did.
She felt warm,
She felt trust,
She felt care,
She won't slaughter this time.

Winter melt into a water drop,
Vanished from bamboo bag.
No more hate, no more avenge,
'Love' is her new name.

This poem is inspired by 'Summer' @ Delilah, thank you dear. Hope you like this x

kivihe

@kivihe

Hi, I'm 21 from London. I love perfume, converse, trip, vintage,museums, and reading. Finance student, a bit weird. But someone told me weird is cool!! Trying to record the thoughts in mind ????

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@Delilah hope you like :)

Really nice I like the snow queen lol 😊

@kivihe Yes I love that snow queen too :)

@aleishagayle20 lol I love her too, actually a girl needs love. x

@melody lol she is a miracle zx

@kivihe hahaha guess so my snow queen doesn't in the post I did for her lmao 😄

@aleishagayle20 lmao! You can post one about your snow queen haha. It must be splendid! X

@kivihe I already have lol like 3 days ago read it off you like she was the perfect bitch hahaha

@aleishagayle20 haha I'll go and check!!

@kivihe cool 😘

There are another two about 'snow queen' by @aleishagayle20 and @Delilah. Hope you guys enjoy zx

Aww that's so sweet and really clever 😊 turning winter back into something good. Love this 💗

@Delilah lol I'm really glad you like this 😊 lol thank you for the great poem, and repost too xx

@kivihe no problemo bub 😉

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@kivihe excellent write and very very clever :) love it!!

@Delilah mwah!!! I thought I failed the repost of urs. But it succeed lol wt could I say...my poor Internet

@Dovahkiin wow, dear you are just too sweet xx

@kivihe no problemo :D

This is awesome, sweetie! ;D x

@HeatherAnne lol thank you very much, dear lol💓💓

@kivihe Brilliant :)

@Weirdwolf thank you my dear sir 😘😘

@Dovahkiin u on kik?

@kivihe I am :) my username is dovahkiin86 :)

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