7 August 2012
This isn't where I want to be,standing in the rain on the outside of the greasiest diner this side of cedar wood falls, Fatboys diner, but this is it, the place I work, the place I've worked for 2 years, the same repetitive, dead end job, for two years, putting up with the same dead end people, Monday to Friday fo-
"are you alright Hunny?"
"yes Mrs Kelly, I'm fine."
"then what are you doing standing in the rain, staring at the floor?"
"i'm jus- oh don't worry about it, I'm just thinking"
"Same old Mary-Jane, head in the clouds as usual, well I'll see you inside, Unless you plan on staying out here all day and catching a cold?"
And with that I head inside, to the nauseating smell of grease, the tacky decor, cheap wooden booths, green and yellow tiles and colourful customers of Fatboys.
After 6 hours of shovelling sub standard food and listening to the repetitive ring of the order bell, I finally get to leave, god I wish I could get a better job than this...
"What was that miss Wilson!"
"What, what was what mr Grenich?"
"You wish you could get a better job than this, Huh, then why don't you?, go on go get one, don't let me stop you!"
And then I realise, I was thinking out loud, and Mr Grenich had over heard...
"I don't expect to see you back tomorrow, or ever! Get out of my sight!"
My head rushes, did i just get FIRED? Too many thoughts rush through my head at once and my legs begin to go weak..
"Did I not make myself clear.. GET OUT OF MY SIGHT!"
Soo what do you think, is it worth finishing and could It make a good book.
I'll explain the plot line and character a bit more in another opus but this one is purely for your thoughts on wether i could improve this bit
Thanks
The Start To A Story/hopefully Book • Opuss № I