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Wonderful Weakness

The drug of the thought
The burning of mind
The ache of the soul
And the vision of the blind

The innocent thought
Followed by a dream
Converting to a blushing
A quite thrilling scene

What a wonderful weakness
What a way to be an offer
What a pretty sort of evil
What a lovely way to suffer

The rouse of the moment
The stealing of breath
The killing of moral
The lust and threat

Suspiciousness of others
The trusting of a new
The mind games, the blaming
And the things you can not do

What a wonderful weakness
What a way to be an offer
What a pretty sort of evil
What a lovely way to suffer

(I wrote this whole poem, but before I only posted the 'chorus'. This poem means a lot to me though)

mai

@mai

My name is Mai. I have so far lived for 21 years and most of those years have I spent in my beloved birth country Denmark. I love to write and I often write poetry and song lyrics for my music. I have lived half a year in USA, which is one of the many reasons that I value the english language so much, though I do espesially love the various accents from Great Brittain. I am, for a fact, actually seriously considering moving to England. Anyway: read, if you'd like, my posts and feel very free to commend on them.

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Thanks .. I

* it's the deepest truth .. And this poem/words mean a lot to me