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maisiebeth
maisiebeth • 253 followers

Still four to go, but fourteen down
I'll finally get away from this town

Everybody that had wished me away
Will happily celebrate on this day

Fourteen down, now four to go
Get me out before I'm too low

I scream until my lungs corrode
But no one will listen until I can vote

So four to go, but fourteen down
And then I'll give myself a crown

For lasting this long before I drown.

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{why does no one listen to me just because I'm not 18? Don't the opinions of everyone matter? I'm sick of silence.}

#coming-of-age #general #rebellion #social-critique #teenage-angst #youth-perspective
maisiebeth

@maisiebeth

I believe in John Lennon because he told me all I need is love, & to me that seems pretty accurate.

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Comments & Feedback (12)

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
May 16, 2012 at 1:39 AM

Hahaha that's being a kid for you 😏 I like this very nice your string don't depend on others opinions to get through life make your own path 😏

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
May 16, 2012 at 1:39 AM

*strong

maisiebeth
maisiebeth
May 16, 2012 at 1:45 AM

@aleishagayle20 thank you for the advice, you're right. It just gets old, that's all. 😒 but oh well, life goes on. 😼

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
May 16, 2012 at 1:58 AM

@maisiebeth hehe wait until your older you'll wish to be young again believe me 😏 and that's it head up keep strong and carry on 😊

maisiebeth
maisiebeth
May 16, 2012 at 2:54 AM

@aleishagayle20 haha, yeah I probably will! Thank you 😊😄

Weirdwolf
Weirdwolf
May 16, 2012 at 7:23 AM

@aleishagayle20 you think your old? Damn that must make me a pensioner :)

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
May 16, 2012 at 9:02 AM

@Weirdwolf lmao haha I'm not old feel it tho 😏

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
May 16, 2012 at 9:02 AM

@maisiebeth 😘

Weirdwolf
Weirdwolf
May 16, 2012 at 9:04 AM

@maisiebeth I think 16 should be old enough to vote.

maisiebeth
maisiebeth
May 16, 2012 at 10:35 AM

@Weirdwolf I think so too.

naaviie
naaviie
May 16, 2012 at 11:53 AM

You'll get there, don't worry. 😊

maisiebeth
maisiebeth
May 16, 2012 at 11:54 AM

@naaviie thanks 😊❤

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