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I trusted you.
Not to hurt me.
To add another cut to what I thought couldn't get worse.
You proved me wrong.
Because now,
There's another place
That marks my hurt.

You promised me.
You'd be there for me.
You'd help me through the struggles.
You lied.
Now,
Your gone
Laughing at my pain.

I swore I wouldn't cry.
Wouldn't show weakness.
Wouldn't let people see how much I hurt.
I broke.
I cried,
Till I couldn't breath anymore
Then I cried more.

They all told me they loved me.
They would be there for me.
Would never leave me.
They left.
Moved on
To places that were better
People that were better.

mary1611

@mary1611

I'm 16 and a junior in high school. I'm very shy about my writing but I'm hoping feed back from people I don't know can help me improve my writing and make me better.

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I don't have a title yet. I kinda suck at giving my stuff titles.