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Walk The Dark Side- 74

"Her heart distorted frantically in the eerie night air", hand on her heart to scared to even breath. Was this a dream or was she really acting out a part in the night dwellers it was to scary to think about. Helen sat up in bed and wondered why she was having these so many nightmares these days. She thought to herself the many strange happening that had occurred over the last month.

If she had believed in the undead that might be the excuse for such strange dreams and happenings, but she didn't believe such rubbish, she shrugged of the downcast feeling and jumped out of bed.

After her morning shower she always felt better, she quickly dressed and went downstairs. As she approached the breakfast room a strange sensation swept over her, there was someone in her house, what should she do. She picked up the candlestick from the hall and made her way into the sitting room.

There was a man sitting in her granddads chair, he didn't seem hear or to notice her come into the room. This intruder made Helen feel threatened, she could see the back of this man he was a very large, wore a trilby and had on a raincoat. She did not know anyone who wore such cloths, they where too old fashioned even for her father.

Helen suddenly remembered that over the last month she had seen images of this man many times before or someone the same shape, build and wore the same type of cloths, but where was it that she had seen him, she could not remember.

Still holding onto the candlestick tightly she ventured further into the room, fear gripped her she must defend herself, he had been shadowing her for weeks, he must have some sinister motive for being in her house uninvited. Helen now held the candlestick firmly with both hands, she raised her arms high above her head, she took a deep breath and whacked the man over the head the candlestick burying deep into his skull.

After his fall from the blow he attempted to get up to get up so she whacked him again.... Once.....Twice ..... Three times, more till he lay still, she finally stopped thrashing him with the candlestick she was exhausted now and lay beside this man, now dead.
There was blood every, she looked in horror at what she had done, she was covered in blood. Oh My God she screamed, the sound of the screams rang loudly in her ears
Then she woke up it was all a dream, but somehow knew this was not the end of her nightmare.

marymint

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@yikici. This is my first attempt, don't know if I am on the right theme because I don't know #nightdwellers, if its wrong theme please let me know and I will unmarked it.β˜ŽπŸ“žπŸŽˆ

@marymint Heya, I just tagged you into a post all about nightdwellers; I personally think your piece is in keeping with it, we can ask the man in charge too @RichWithey 😘

I noticed you haven't tagged nightdwellers in the piece yet, when you do please ensure you post your story as a new post as tags don't show up in the search area after they've just been edited. Ensure you tag it as I have in my piece. ☺✨

@yikici. Thank you as I understand it I copy the same story into #nightdwellers and remove the #beginningline, is that correct?πŸ‘£πŸ’­πŸŒ‚

@yikici. Thank you for like and RP.πŸŒ—πŸŒ˜πŸŒš

You can copy and post the story as new attaching both beginningline & nightdwellers tag as I've just done on my newest post; then you can delete this one so there's not a duplicate (if you want to), does that make sense?

@sammielee46. Thank you for like and RP.πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€

Really like this πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ you don't need to delete this just add #nightdwellers tag, do you know how to edit it?

@yikici sorry just read your other comment tracking the tags doesn't always work anyway the best thing is to take a screenshot of each poem I think that's what a lot if us do 😘

@sjw oh... I didn't know that, still new to Opuss. Thank you for that Sie 😘✨

@marymint take @sjw sound advice -it seems I'm clueless lol

@yikica. Thank you just posted what I though you meant, post 75, how do you Take a screen shot on an iPad?🌹🌹🌹

@sjw. Thank you for like, RP and advice, thanks.πŸŒ”πŸŒ“πŸŒ³

@marymint press and hold the on/off button on the top right hand corner and whilst holding it press the bottom centre button you should hear a click then check your photos and it should be there 😘

@marymint oh and I just realised you've got it under general blog which means if someone is searching stories it won't come up do you know how to change genre?

@yikici. Thanks for your patience I have created a copy same name different number. Is it best to keep both copies 74, and 75 or place both tags on the one copy?β˜”πŸŒˆ

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@marymint you can keep both copies if you like, this way you won't lose any comments on here. It's just down to your personal preference. ☺✨

@RichWithey I thought you would -don't get too carried away though. 😝✨

@RichWithney, thanks for advice.🍷🍷🍷

@yikici. Thank yupβ˜€β˜€β˜€

@swj. Thank you for like, RP and comments.@yikici @yikici 🍺🍺🍺

@yikici.thank you🍷🍷🍷

☺You're extremely welcome 😘✨

@sammielee46. Thanks for RP, like and comments.πŸ†πŸ†πŸ†

@sjm. Thank you, what genre do I place it under ?🍺🍺🍺

@yikici.thank you for like and RP. 🍷🍷🍷

Thanks everyone for comments🍎🍏🍎

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@RichWithey oh then I must say a humungous apology to both the lovely @sjw & @wolfie -you guys are in charge too it seems. πŸ˜˜πŸ’βœ¨

@marymint your welcome 😘

@yikici but it is @RichWithey that's the 'original' nightdweller lol 😘

Now this is becoming confusing lol -think @RichWithey wants to confuse lol @sjw

@yikici put it this way I'm starting to think he's possibly a vamp he hardly sleeps at night he's worse than me and I thought I was bad! πŸ˜³πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜

@sjw lmao -oh wait I should be like this 😳

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@RichWithey yup we are lol

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@RichWithey think @sjw and I will have special intelligence on you. πŸ˜‰βœ¨

@yikici lol πŸ˜‚ and besides@RichWithey I'm better at Black ops than you 😝😘

@sjw woo hoo -game on. 😝 @RichWithey

@yikci@RichWhithey. Just posted part1 Walk on the Dark side, can you check back and look at my 74 and 75 post it has ghosted. Double vision, I place the two codes on this post, could it be my little dog keeps jumping on my iPad while I am typing ?🌚🌚🌚

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@RichWithey vampireninjapirate 😳 now there's an interesting concept, so in other words a drunken hyper bloodthirsty kinda guy πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜

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Problem solved guys, I have been found out how too take a picture of my piece of work, maybe I was a little to slow with the shutter holding down the on/off then pressing the open button. Know this to be a fact because I just did it again a few moments ago

@RichWithey @sjw lmao you are insane Rich 😝✨

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@RichWithey and pray tell where was that certificate issued...the fake certificate industry? 😝

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@RichWithey aha! I knew it. 😝✨

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