Hello There, Kind Eyes

milkeyedmender • 195 followers

Your eyes they shine
As bright as the bluest skies,
And they break my heart without trying;
Without fighting these walls that I've built

You, you make me feel alive again
It's like falling in love when you're 10,
Only better.

Wait up, wait up
I've got something to tell you
That I'm weaker everyday,
When you come closer
And I can breathe you into my soul,
Oh Darling, you make me whole
You make me better than I was before.

I believe in you, believe in me,
I believe in all the things that you've said to be
I believe in us, believe in trust
I believe in everything that you said would last.

#ballad #emotional-vulnerability #love-poem #romantic-confession

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Late at night, without a warning, My thoughts return to you, All the wonderful things you do.

For You.

I wrote this for you, And every word is true. Every time I fall, Whenever I see those eyes. Darling, believe these words, As they're anything but lies.

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You've always been by my side and given a helping hand. I wish I could bottle you up and sell you, you'd be high in demand. You're such a shining star when you banish away all my fear.

Why Does She Stay?

Sometimes I wonder why you stay I never seem to know. Maybe you could tell me why it is you never seem to go.

You

You make my world complete. Ever since the day you swept me off my feet. You make me smile in so many ways. I think I'm falling for you even though it's early days. You wrap your arms around me tight.

Can This Be Love

When I'm around you. I freeze up and get real nervous,. My stomach get bubbly. And I become wordless. I cherish all the time. That we spend together. Endeavoring to making. You mines forever.

Keeper Of My Heart

I love you With all my heart You hold the key to it's once darkened cage You have unleashed it, taught it to love again I do not ever want to stop loving you Or the amazing things you do.

I Miss You

I miss your body laid next to mine. I miss the way our bodies intertwine. I miss those little kisses up and down my neck. I miss my head resting on your pecs. I miss sharing my duvet with you.

Comments & Feedback (9)

May 5, 2012 at 10:07 PM

You're so talented!

May 5, 2012 at 10:16 PM

@minni92 ☺but I am merely a fraction of greater poets/writers out ther! in any case, thank you for seeing something in my works! ☺

May 5, 2012 at 10:19 PM

@milkeyedmender I find that you are one of them so can shush with your modesty :p and you are most welcome

May 5, 2012 at 10:21 PM

May 5, 2012 at 10:27 PM

@minni92 haha now because of you I've just sillily sent out an empty comment! Really, I thank you 😃

May 5, 2012 at 10:29 PM

@milkeyedmender oh so that was mmyyyy fault now was it ;) :p you should be giving any thanks! :D

May 5, 2012 at 10:32 PM

@milkeyedmender You are really good, I'm glad I found your page the other night.😊 keep up the great stuff.

May 5, 2012 at 10:39 PM

@Stablish ☺no, actually i was lucky that you found me, my works wouldn't have been seen had not for your efforts in reposting them! 😌

May 5, 2012 at 10:50 PM

@milkeyedmender If I like it I will repost, looks like other people like it as well😊 keep up the good work😊

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