A simplistically dynamic mystery,
Ravelled
in
lustful
passionate
torturous
history.
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23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.
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@naaviie I might be wrong, but I think the word you might be looking for is tortuous? Let me grab a dictionary, I remember reading somewhere that torturous/tortuous are often confused and I can't remember which one is correct!
Tortuous means 'winding, crooked, tricky to handle', torturous means 'causing pain or torture'. So both words would make sense, depending on your meaning!
Poetry is a careful art; it's culinary writing! You have to add the exact right amount of spice to their poem, just enough sexy-sauce to get the tongue wet, and a dash of insanity, to blow their writing taste buds ;) all while making it look (and taste) beautiful! Alot of people don't understand how hard it is :) but you... YOU'RE POETRY DISHES ARE A MASTERPIECE!
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