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Cold

I am cold,
Colder than ice,
Still,
No breath,
No heartbeat,
Baited in the snow,
A brilliant blue,
An icicle hanging low.

I am cold,
Like the depths of the ocean,
Or the chilling grip of death,
Tendrils of glaciers,
Wrapped around my breath,

I am cold,
Nothing can warm me,
But your hand to hold.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (18)

Lovely, but a little sad. πŸ’šπŸ’š

IT'S EDWARD CULLEN! 😍 YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT EDWARD!!!!!! ❀❀❀

@eddie12309 - thank you πŸ’šπŸ’š

@LeahLovesEC - bingo baby! πŸ’šπŸ˜œπŸ‘βœ¨

@naaviie am I right?! πŸ˜„

Great stuff, but I hate EC, soooo annoying, but its a really nice icy piece!

@LeahLovesEC @DarkLioness - it wasn't written with him in mind, but when Leah pointed it out it was spot on. Interesting what my unconscious comes up with 😏 I like twilight 😜

@naaviie I like twilight too, just not him, he's a control freak boyfriend, who I wouldn't date if you paid me!πŸ˜„

@DarkLioness πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ he is pretty intense!

Twilight = ruining vampires 😜 Some of us were vamp fiends before the twilight generation was even born. Anyone remember Buffy the Vampire slayer with Angel, the original hot brooding good-guy vampire? 😠

I shall climb down off my high horse now πŸ˜‰

@Irrational_Kimmi - yeh I love Buffy too. Twilight isn't for everyone, but lots of people get enjoyment out of it.

@naaviie it's still drivel πŸ˜‰πŸ˜œ

@naaviie ❀😊😍☺

@Irrational_Kimmi Ooo! And 'An Interview With A Vampire' that is an awesome film!

@LeahLovesEC yes!!! And more awesome than all the twilightness put together. Sorry, I do like to rant about twilight 😜😁

@Irrational_Kimmi I love Twilight, but the old vampire films are amazing!

@Irrational_Kimmi I have whole box sets of Buffy at home, best vampire series EVER!❀❀❀❀

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