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Commitment Issues

I love you,
I do,
I can't believe it
But it's true,

When you're with me,
Or within me,
I can't help but feel
... Lost ...
This really isn't my deal,

A leap of faith,
Just isn't enough,
Because believing
It's bloody tough,

You see us together,
Into the future you plan,
Convince me it's ok,
If I call you my man,

I tell you I cheat
But you don't even flinch
When I've been with another,
Perhaps I need a pinch,
Easy acceptance,
Perhaps it's not real,
Maybe I'm dreaming,
holding on to something surreal.

I'll break you,
Burn you,
Run away scared,
Stay away!
From my heart so impaired,

You tricked me,
You trickster!
You sneaking mister,
I didn't see you coming,
I should have known,
You want a nest built,
But I just want it flown,

Now here I am,
My heart loves again,
The betrayer, the wanderer,
Now waiting for the time when
I will run,
And run fast,
Saying thanks for the fun,
But no,
This really can't be done...
Can it?

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (20)

Yes! yes it can! :) fab piece

@missyhaitch - awe, thanks Holly - I hope you are right! 💚

@naaviie For once I think I am :) me and him <<~ (see picture) are proof :) good luck! x

@missyhaitch - that pic is so adorable! You look lovely together! Happy too ☺💚

Brilliantly written & expressed beautifully. I've had commitment issues all

my life-if it wasn't me it was him! Finally there now though.....(I think?!?) 😌😘

@Fly10 - thank you!! Yes it is a toughie and I'm trying to work through it! Haha, I'll just pretend you didn't write that bit in brackets there!!! 💚😘✨

Always keep an open heart and you'll be fine no matter what you choose. 💗💗

@naaviie thank you :) we are... been off and on for over 2 years but finally we've been together 6 solid months and still I can't believe how happy we are :) so on answer to your poem you can do it! xx

@ckahn thank you! That is good advise 💚

@missyhaitch yey!! 💚👏😘✨

@puffy1980 😘

Great write! I'm the wrong person to give advice on this though...

@Nom - awe dear, you experience similar? 😔

@naaviie yep, from the same perspective as you....

@Nom - it is quite a nuisance

Hey we have had this chat before my sweet...follow your heart...when you think about it all too much, you talk yourself out of it...God I've been married 6 years in a couple of weeks and together for 11... Although I'm happy I still get days when I'm like...gulp...am I here for the rest of my life?...gulp...but then I just think what are you doing Kim?...then I'm fine again...it's a terrifying prospect of giving yourself to one person, together forever Amen etc...but just goooooo with it my sweet...big huggies💪💪💪💪😘😘😘

@misslittleDHP - hahaha I know, I know! I really am terrible for it! It's awful, constantly contradicting myself with the whole thing. I'm giving myself up to the flow now, this one helped get it out my system! I'm going to crawl back into my dream lands and stop moaning hahaha! Thank you, you are so lovely, your words mean a lot! 💚🍸✨💚🍸✨

@misslittleDHP - though is it slightly terrifying that after 11 years it can be the same?! Oh well, at least we can put it down as 'normal' 😜💚

@naaviie sooooo true my sweet💗💚💜

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