I could swim the seven seas,
But I fear the salt makes me sneeze,
I could fly way up in the sky,
But I fear it is way too high,
Perhaps I'll sit out this one time,
Practice my adventures first in rhyme.
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23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.
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Comments & Feedback (10)
I love your words. A pleasure to read. Love the way you rhyme. I'm not there yet but I'm learning little by little. ✨🌟✨🌟
@sleepydragon - my grandma's infamous saying is "practice makes perfect!" do true, and opuss is great for it. I never wrote poetry until I got this app!!
You are a sweetie. And it's true, I think I am getting better because I am writing more often. All you lovely people on Opuss are so supportive it makes you want to progress.
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