23 May 2012
Hey, if I could have some advice for this it would be much appreciated. It's a poem for my boyfriend who's just lost his grandad, thanks xxx
People piled high in houses Wearing black Sad expressions on their face Like somebody died
People walk behind the car Wobbling In their silly heels Like somebody died
People cry at a box Grasping, clutching at the air Hopelessly Like somebody died
People gathered in a garden, Throwing Gravel and rocks Like somebody died
The whole world was silenced Empty With sad expressions on their faces Because he died
Because he died Stolen Quickly from the earth He was too good for it anyway
Because he died Remember Him, we will never Forget
For he is now a Butterfly Loving life, just Fluttering by
Advice? • Opuss № I