26 April 2012
Dear friends, I think statistics can be very useful for our community, for each user. I want to review most talented and perspective authors. I will examine and review posts, commentaries and collect full statistics about them. Why? It is interesting and helpful for authors. I notice you all it is just a experiment, please, understand it and let's be adequate. And, of course, any of you can review me. If someone wants to join me - welcome))))
STATISTYX *project.
*statistics + styx (the river of the dead souls)
LET'S BEGIN! LET'S BE GIN))))
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Nick: @sark Name: Julie Bio: I know more than I think I know, just as I know less than I want to know. Homeland: Hungary Time in OPUSS: month Looks: beautiful girl Supposed zodiacal sign: taurus Personality analyze: She is absolutely unique and amazing person (great role model). She has brilliant sense of humor and very cool music taste (I've the same one but more crazy). I suppose she is novice in poetry and prose, anyway she should practice more and more and upgrade her lexicon, imagination and originality for her posts cause she has all things to be first-class writer.
Following / Followers: 28/335 Verdict about it: cool statistics!!!! ;)
Posts: 44 Categories: poems, jokes, story. Topics of the posts: humanity, sins, problems, feelings, humor. Average posts quality: 7 / 10.
Best posts:
1) "Chapter 1-3". +: very good sense and ending, nice aura of text so you can feel it, not in first try but good anyway. -: this story needs in more straight and clear story-line, because sometimes it is too difficult for relax reading. Score: 7,0/10
2) "Bio in rhymes". +: original idea and nice realization. I ask myself why I didn't do the same thing early, fat, lazy bastard! Simple clever idea! -: Too simple, no fun lines, no sarcasm. Score: 6,5/10
3) "How to cope..." + / - : not bad but not too original and fun. This post can be useful for any reader with the same problems but, for example, author could find more fun and smart solutions, but idea is really good. Score: 6,5/10
4) "WARNING". Joke post. +: classic good non-sense post, really funny. -: no Score: 7,5/10
5) "Payback" +: all poetic elements are good. Short, heart-piercing and soulful poem...like a silver bullet. Mast read. -: no Score: 7.0/10
6) "@smellyfingers" +: fun, sarcastic and nice written poem. -: "Smelly" deserve bigger and more fragrant ode ,) Score: 6,5/10
7) "Invisible friends". First class reflection. +: must read for every person. Honest, full of heart and wise post. Even through you are Buddhist or mystic read it. -: no Score: 9/10
8) "Not my son" +: amazing short shoot of the world of true fear and care. This story is about REAL human, not just stereotype-n-trigger bio-robot. REAL human understand that there are no borders and hostile countries, cause we are all live on the one beautiful planet, we are all have only one home...and there are no unfamiliar children because every child is not just parents headache or another little monster, no, every child is important part of our society, humanity and planet. If you are REAL human you should love each child and help in any dangerous situation. -: some technical elements are not perfect. Score: 8/10
9) "Silly rhymes". Simple poem for poetic skills training. +: simple, fine in rhymes, fun in some lines. -: too simple and not original. Score: 6,0/10
10) "@octopuss" +: absolutely genius poem, one of the best I ever read. -: too short for such beautiful work. This poem should be endless :) Score: 11/10
Verdict: I don't like read prose but, and it is amazing, I read @sark posts with interest and joy. She has big heart, big brains and big taste to everything...fantastic combination for any person, especially for creative one. Sark is not a shark she is shining guiding spark for the magic ancient ark of the beautiful words...
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Nick: @ydistral Name: Rachel Bio: ink and steel, drunk and stroppy...Life should not be feared when you have the words to tame all... Homeland: UK Time in OPUSS: 17 days Looks: very beautiful eyes =) Supposed zodiacal sign: leo Personality analyze: amazing person with great temper, she is smart and wise, very talented and caring about others.
Following / Followers: 25 / 53 Verdict about it: mix of famous and unknow Opuss authors.
Posts: 17 Categories: poems Topics of the posts: death, bad sides of humanity, passion, love, loneliness, void. Posts quality: 7,0 / 10 but not for the all readers. Her poems are not for sweet rhymes lovers, kids, easy-going guys.
Best poems: 1) "Lust". Mystic and dark passionate poem. +: all this poem is brilliant image, like breathing picture, like bleeding icon...difficult to understand in first try but beautiful, elegant and smart. -: this poem can be shorter. Score: 7,5/10
2) "Masked". Nice poem with very good main message. +: very good ending and sense. -: there are some superfluous and banal lines. Score: 6,5/10
3) "Insomnia". Deep and smart personal poem. +: excellent style and feelings within lines. You can feel what author writes about. Some double-bottoms and hidden secrets. -: no Score: 7,0/10
4) "Reality tripping". Very dark but beautiful rhyme. +: deep allegories and thoughts, whole-poem nice atmosphere. -: no Score: 7,5/10
5) "Obsession" It is her best poem about love. +: very enthralling story, perfect ending, empathy effect. -: too big, some void lines. Score: 7,5/10 Potential score: 8,5/10
Verdict: dark poet with excellent style, lexicon and atmosphere. She have to write much more but with bigger attention to unique lines and balance.
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Nick: @codenameverity Name: Rhian Harris Bio: MCR, we are the in crowd, all time low, thirsty seconds to mars, panic at the disco, boys like girls, fall out boy. Homeland: UK Time in OPUSS: 17 days Looks: - like good poster ,) Supposed zodiacal sign: libra Personality analyze: good and smart girl with big heart. She feel both light and darkness in the our world but she doesn't like it and keep hope for happy future.
Following / Followers: 77 / 42 Verdict about it:
Posts: 44 Categories: poems, jokes, quotes, song lyrics. Topics of the posts: fate, humanity, war, love. Average posts quality: 6,5 / 10. I recommend her poems to wild range of readers but mostly to young ones. Because these poems are simple, clear and with good sense.
Best poems:
1) "Coming home in a hearse". +: good and important main message of poem. Mast-read poem for teenagers and kids. -: not too unique Score: 6,5/10
2) "Most people". + /-: If you want to blame humanity do it with good taste and allegories, do it with deep thoughts and beautiful lines...or do it with bloody screams of pure fury and burning shades of holy vengeance, but don't do it in banal way...it is boring and non-effective. This poem nice...just nice. Score: 6,0/10
4) "A vision of my future". +: atmosphere of doom, inner beauty, not bad technical poetic elements. -: I don't think this poem can be good for readers, cause it is too sad and personal. Will you be glad to read post about death such beautiful and nice girl? I'm not! Score: 6,5/10
5) "Story" +: very nice lexicon, good atmosphere, original story-line (I hope). -: some sentences are too big. Sometimes author uses too rare words, it is good for critics and writers and it's turn story to unique stylized one, but it is not good for readers. This story needs more details. Too short. Score: 7/10
6) "My diarest" +: good ending of poem, nice rhythm and rhyme, few really cool lines. -: banal story, banal allegories. Score: 6,5/10
Verdict: she is new in dark style poetry but she has enough potential to write more deep, unique and smart poems. Let's watch her creative way.
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Number "55" in top-100 Nick: @ileeam Name: Liam Bio: good father, 20-years old Homeland: UK Time in OPUSS: more than 20 days Looks: classic fun good guy. Supposed zodiacal sign: taurus Personality analyze: easy-going smart young man with sense of humor, but he is quite serious in questions about creative, art and text. Nice combination for good writer. And I think he is happy in his regular life that's why he likes dark stories about unhappy marriage and blood.
Following: 49 Verdict about it: really nice party I think! Followers: 70
Posts: 23 Categories: blog, poems (80/20) Topics of the posts: madness, death, unhappy marriage, many many many bad things... Posts quality: 1) non-fiction: one good post about game industry 2) poetry: 2.1) Fun, little and nonsense poems (but not too nonsense, it is not good). 2.2) Dark style and good rhythmic poems about ruined lifes and happiness. I think he could write them in prose, because the most wonderful thing in these poems is atmosphere not sense or deep thoughts. I can taste it and understand cause my main style is dark one but I like deep deep dark color with many other colors, so he have to write in more deep way to get more clean darkness. Rude murders and simple blood are not enought. @smellyfingers is more good in this aspect (but not too much). 2.3) Simple dark style sonnet. It is just stuff for poetic skills training 2.4) One simple poem with weird name "squid". Not good, not bad. Regular rhyme. 2.5) "True" poem. Sometimes you can find this poem really mad, sometimes too chaotic or boring...but he just got tangled in his thoughts and technical elements. It is half-done poem. 2.6) Some very simple but clean haikus 2.7) "Deserving of death". Technically best poem with nice poetic tricks, but if you are poet with good skills it is piece of cake for you, so I won't be little girl with wide-opened eyes. If we will examine lines for finding a good sense and more we will find no rhymes, no unique images or deep thoughts, just good style, atmosphere and dances between words. 2.8) "Like clockwork". This dark poem is deeper and more beautiful than others similar poems of Liam. I see moves to the right side. It was try to create poem with fine allegory in the all lines. Not bad. 3) fi
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