9 June 2012
With thanks to @MrAlex @Naaviie and @Eyes5IB check out there perspectives.
I held up my fist then looked round the corner, my eyes scrutinised the shadows, trying to detect life. I saw none. I opened my hand, palm facing forwards. The symbol to advance. Isaac dropped to a crouch then ran across the corridor, ready to open fire. The looked back and nodded, the cost was clear. Alex slid out from the shadows and stealthily advanced, ready for anything. Nicola was the last to go, she moved slightly reluctantly but at least she kept going. That was good considering what they had already been through. (flashback) Running down a different corridor, going to fast. Bursting through the door at the end. It was a trap. Opponents everywhere, armed to the teeth. They didn't stand a chance. Stevie was the first to go. Filled with lead he was dead before he hit the floor. After that I lost track, men dropping like flies. Too proud to retreat. "Josh are you crazy, we're getting destroyed, we need to go." Nicola screeched at me whilst reloading behind a table. She reminded me what it meant to be captain. I was responsible, not to win but to protect my troops. "Retreat, Jack cover us." We ran. Jack tried to follow then a bullet emerged from his chest. He looked down, a cry forming on his lips. It didn't make it past his lips as several bullets found there way into the back of his skull. He fell. (back again) A shout ahead snapped me back to reality, it was shortly followed by the clattering of weapons being drawn. I brought my FAMAS up to fire at these new opponents. They were all dead before I had even looked down the scope. I glanced back at what was left of my team and have them an appreciative nod. We neared the end of the corridor. A set of double doors was all that protected us from whatever lay beyond it. I gestured to the door then at Nicola and Alex. They nodded then assumed positions on either side of the door. Isaac and I leant back against the wall, ready to go. I signalled, Nicola and Alex barged the doors open whilst Isaac lay down fire and I threw a grenade. The doors were then shut. We waited for the blast. Then counted to ten. I nod, again the doors open, again Isaac lays down fire. This time I accompany him. We run into the room shortly followed by Alex and Nicola, it's empty. Still better to be safe than sorry. I look around, there's four exits to the room. I point at Isaac then at the first exit to my left. He nods and cautiously heads down it. I point at Alex then at the exit to my right. He departs. Nicola looks at me. "Which do you want." She says politely, gesturing at the two exits ahead. "The left one." I replied. She walks on making a bee line for the left exit ahead. I sigh, she's always so difficult. I turn and trudge slowly down the front right tunnel.
Ok guys write up to here as part one. Then part two your free to go where ever But stick to the theme and end up in a big hall. Then I'll write part 3 from me and so on.
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