I wonder sometimes if we're stuck to each other,
If we're better together, like hills and the heather.
Can I kiss you each morning , if I say the right words?
Are my thoughts fleeting wishes diving like birds?
I wonder sometimes if we're meant to be one.
I forget that it's over, the whole thing is done.
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There needs to be a contract. To sign before love starts. There should be some sort of guidelines. To protect our precious hearts. There needs to be some comeback. For those who break the laws.
Roses are red Violets are blue Is this feeling that you have Really love to you.
Lips whisper in my unbelieving ear, Tales of a love that lingers forever, To mend a broken heart and banish fear, Young lovers need only be together.
@paddyduke This is an Opuss Great. Another piece that sounds effortlessly artistic but not artificial. This is touching, poignant and playful all at once. Admire.
@paddyduke thank YOU. I would like it if Opuss allowed you to send your favourite pieces to a personal online anthology so you could read your favourite pieces in a book-style setting. This piece would be in it.
@wolfie that's not a bad idea at all! Should say it to the developers!! Thanks so much, you're far too kind :)
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