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puffy1980
puffy1980 • 226 followers

I am the voice that's in your head.
Sitting on your shoulder.
Whispering in your ear.
Do it.
You want it.
Don't let that stand in the way.

I am the reason you do those things.
Those thefts.
Those fires.
Those killings.

I am your curse.
I am your blessing.
I am the reason you wake up.
Angry.
Mad.
Murderous.

I tell you what to do.
I am the one in charge.
You listen.
If you don't then I will kill you.

I am the reason your wife left.
Your dog died.
You raped.
You maimed.
You killed.

If I want it, you do it.
Don't you forget that.
I am the reason you fucked up.
Why your life is shit.
Why you are a cunt.

I am the reason.
And this is my story.

#dark-narrative #horror #inner-demon #mental-illness #psychological-horror #unreliable-narrator
puffy1980

@puffy1980

Sick mind. Letting my dark passenger run free. Kik: puddy1980

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Comments & Feedback (12)

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
Jun 3, 2012 at 7:54 PM

This is awesome 😍 I love this lol

puffy1980
puffy1980
Jun 3, 2012 at 7:56 PM

@aleishagayle20 thanks!! :) can't decide to develop it into a story told from the demons point of view, or just leave it, mull it over a bit

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
Jun 3, 2012 at 8:02 PM

@puffy1980 ooo yes that great stuff I may use this as inspiration if you don't mind 😄 I'd tag you anyway 😘

puffy1980
puffy1980
Jun 3, 2012 at 8:03 PM

@aleishagayle20 lol!! Of course I don't mind!! :)

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
Jun 3, 2012 at 8:05 PM

@puffy1980 ooo thank you i'll tag you when I'm done 😄😘 thanks

puffy1980
puffy1980
Jun 3, 2012 at 8:08 PM

@aleishagayle20 no worries!!!! :)

lemonz
lemonz
Jun 3, 2012 at 9:09 PM
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puffy1980
puffy1980
Jun 3, 2012 at 9:10 PM

@lemonz thanks!! :)

lemonz
lemonz
Jun 3, 2012 at 9:14 PM
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melody
melody
Jun 3, 2012 at 9:18 PM

@puffy1980 Its just amazing how you've built up the power little by little 0_0 reminds me of the song demons by imagine dragons :)

aleishagayle20
aleishagayle20
Jun 3, 2012 at 9:27 PM

Mines up go check it out puffy

Snowy
Snowy
Jun 4, 2012 at 8:53 AM

Powerful and with depth, a twisted look into a demon mind. Well done. :) Reminds me a little of Metallica's 'Sad But True' also.

puffy1980
puffy1980
Jun 4, 2012 at 12:42 PM

@Snowy I hadn't made that connection, but thinking about it, it does! :)

Jamtots
Jamtots
Jun 6, 2012 at 3:24 AM

This acts as a nice build up to your story 😄 so glad you developed this into something more

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