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The Perfect Bath

Bubbles, bubbles in my bath
I scoop them up, they make me laugh
To blow on them, and watch them fly
Floating up into the sky
Bubbles, bubbles in my bath

Fire, fire candle burning
Vanilla scent, my senses yearning
I'm mesmerised by the flickering flame
The pretty pattern and dancing game
Fire, fire candle burning

Warm, warm deep water
I sit back and wriggle down
Like a cocoon it wraps around
Sensuous bathing my heart has met
Cosy, comforting, I love the depths
Warm, warm deep water

Tick, tick there is no clock
I don't want my bath to stop.
I don't regret my time wasted away,
This is how I'd spend my everyday.
Nowhere to go, no need to rush
My sweet oasis, my bath is lush
Tick, tick there is no clock

redfae

@redfae

A redhead writer trying to get my novel published. I enjoy writing YA Paranormal Romances and so far had a short story and article published. I maintain my blog and website at www.alisonaldridge.co.nr

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Awesome poetry.(-:

Love it,absolutely sums up one of my face things, I long deep hot bath.

Really good. You are very talented :)

@DaddyDooDahs I'm going to follow u. Gr8 poetry by the way

@jaderennie - thx jade! :)

@Stablish @DaddyDooDahs @kayleigh123 @jaderennie I forgot about the music. Didn't realise until I got in my bath I turned iTunes genius on. Nevermind. Glad you all enjoyed it :) I don't usually write poetry.

I miss my bath in the old place. I used to do everything in there: eat, sleep, write. Probably explain why I have old

Man fingers and toes! :OP

@Zoodark lol

Did you make this up yourself?!

@VerVer yeah :)

Wow! Youre amazing, I need some help with a poetry competition for school, could you hold me come up with something please??

It's sooo good!!! I love baths!!! :D

@VerVer no lol. Practice makes perfect. Just have fun with it and don't worry if it's a bit silly. Hope your teacher likes your poem :)

@lucandsurprise Best way to end a hard day :D

;)

Thanks redfae

@greenpixie tagging you in this as thought you be interested in reading this as your poem reminded me of mind 6months ago lol

Its lovely :)

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