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I wrote two paragraphs randomly, what do you guys think. I love listening to constructive criticism since it helps me write better.
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ryskew
Student from the North East of England. I love writing and want to utilise Opuss to share my short stories, imagination and ideas. All constructive criticism is accepted and valued.
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Stories by @ryskew (9)
Untitled
I can never think of what to share on Opuss, but thanks everyone for reading my short stories. I'll write another one soon..
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Darkness & Despair
I feel blind, engulfed by darkness and isolation. The only thing I can feel is the cracked concrete ground. My senses are slow, and my movements haphazard. The only sense I can work is smell.
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Untitled
"Make things as simple as possible but no simpler." - Albert Einstein.
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Feedback
Is it possible for people to like and comment to tell me if they enjoyed my short stories. I haven't heard negative feedback yet and am still wondering. Thanks..
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Please read: Criticism
Hey, I was just wondering if someone would be able to read through a short story I made earlier, either one of them to give me some criticism and let me know how good I actually am at writing.
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Recreation
"If you have nobody to look up to, recreate yourself for others. What you didn't learn can be their new-found passion.".
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Creatures of Bloodlust
Running. The only thing that could possibly be on my mind. Panting, exhausted, succumbing to the pressure of burning limbs.
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Cocaine Smiles & Violent Domestic Cries
I would like to start by stating that this story is the end to a struggle with psychological problems from what I had written prior.
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