But you see when I'm excited
There's no point in containing it
It shows I'm delighted
Until explodes a bit
Excitement buzzing around
Humming
No hitting the ground
As like a guitar I'm strumming
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Comments & Feedback (18)
@naaviie pretty much it needs some tweaking, I need to record it then play back to see what it's missing! My guitar has sat against my wall for the past 10years untouched! So I used to be multi talented... Still play piano and keyboard 💜
@naaviie love my music any music just can't sing to save my life! But I really don't give a damn if I'm in my car!!!
@naaviie hell yes it's the only way to sing in a car!!! (just seeing panic on other road users faces when you randomly start to do the inbetweeners dance at traffic lights is so funny! Piano is a good choice 😊
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