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"More To Me"

You think you know me
But just you wait and see
There's more to me
Than what your eyes see.

Getting to know the real me
Isn't an easy fete
I'm not the strong front that you see
Inside a broken girl whose body has been beat.

I don't open up to just anyone
Even my ex fiancΓ© of 5years never knew
He just thought the nightmares were of the things he knew had gone on
I've never let out the hellish torment I've been through.

But there's something different about you
You make me feel safe in special kinda way
I want to open up share with you what I've been through
I'm just scared, afraid of what you'll say.

So I'll try and be more open towards you
I'll try to build the confidence to confide
I'll try to trust that we'll work it through
I'll try not to run away and hide.

Couldn't think of a fitting title, until a helping hand came along, thank you @mirabahjojabo

sara_lou

@sara_lou

Hi I'm 25 I love English literature and language. I love travel. Kik- saralouise88 Instagram sara_louise_88 Twitter @SaralouiseD88

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Comments & Feedback (3)

Brilliant! I love this. I am working on a similar themed poem and this is great inspiration for it. Perhaps I could suggest a title "More To Me" :)

@mirabahjojabo that is a brilliant suggestion thank you :) x

@sara_lou ur welcome :)

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