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serenityeverard

I am an exceptional writer....so says my teacher. I'm here to see if she's right. I want to prove to myself that I'm not being fed a load of crap. I wanna be criticized as much as you guys can criticize me. Tell me what would make my stories better. Tell me if I spell something wrong. Tell if my ideas are boring and mainstream or too out of the ordinary. Just judge my writing the best you can Kay? I use writing to rid myself of emotions so don't be too surprised if plot lines change dramatically. So, you wanna know about me right? That's the only reason you keep reading...I'm a 16 year old girl from san diego. I'm a navy brat, so that means I've been every where. I like to meet new people and I love to travel. I dream of living on the road, and documenting things in my life through writing, photography and cinematography.

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serenityeverard
2012-06-02T07:16:14

I Miss Opuss

This is an illegally authored piece, but I feel that my friends here should know that I didn't just drop opus . I was grounded, and I'm not aloud on opus by decree of my father.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-30T02:54:43

Hiding

He's hiding again, prince. What do I do. How do I get him to tell me what's wrong with him. I can tell he's hurting, and i know he needs to talk about it.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-29T04:29:35

That "type"

Wouldn't they be surprised. WELL.... Wouldn't they. They have no idea what happened And would they believe. Would they. Most likely not. You aren't that "Type" At least...

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serenityeverard
2012-04-29T01:40:53

A Death

Today, April 28, 2012, Cassandra Maxine Walls died. In her place, a birth. Kaz has officially entered this world. She doesn't need approval. She doesn't need love. And she doesn't need appreciation.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-28T22:28:09

Your Voice

It makes me so happy, sir, to sit and listen to the few words you've said to me. My heart skips a beat and my soul sings as each syllable caresses me like a lovers hand.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-28T07:31:16

I ____ You

I love you, my dear, while I hate you, my love, while I yearn for you, sir, while I seek to destruct you. Tell me, what shall I do, sweet man, with such conflicting feelings.

8 2 35 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-27T04:18:27

This Feeling

Heat creeped up my face as the words left my lips. I shouldn't have said it, I shouldn't have even felt it, now it's too late. Now I'll have to endure the mortification of your rejection.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-26T13:25:44

Untitled

It's quite funny, when you reveal your heart to someone who isn't listening, to believe that theres a chance that they care about you as much as you do they.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-25T19:57:15

Tingles.

You know that warm shivering tingle that goes up and down your spine when he looks deep into your eyes.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-25T04:13:05

Today

So today I sat in credit recovery English, and my friend alan sat next to me. As many of you know, I've currently got a gf so I'm taken.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-24T04:06:38

Named Her!

Ok so we agreed on Calla Lilly. My pretty girls name is Calla Lilly.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-24T01:50:52

Omg!!!

I got a girl cat. Any name suggestions?.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-23T16:10:24

Love?

Love is the slowest, most painful, most accepted form of suicide. -Cassandra walls.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-23T05:43:29

To Those I've Loved And Lost

This is written for all people who have walked out, or have been pushed out, of my life. This is to M.B, R.F, T.B, C.M, C.J.G, J.M, and all who have influenced me enough to write in your honor.

4 10 161 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-22T05:39:47

Coming Out

Nothing can say how much it hurts to see my father look at me the way he just did. I never want to feel like this again. What's wrong with me?.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-22T02:15:59

That moment when....

You realize that no matter how much you try, no matter how much you beg, promise, regret, he'll never be yours again.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-21T17:52:42

Ugh.....

Yep. I'm dying right now!. And it ain't pretty. I'm sure most people have taken world history as I am now.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-20T17:53:26

DOS

Today, my good friends, I would like you to join me in silence as I give up the use of speech to draw attention to the harassment of gay and lesbian and bisexuals.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-20T13:59:11

Cute

Oh your so adorable, you have no idea how far I've dug my claws into your soul. You don't know what type of devil is hiding under this cute angelic glamor.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-19T19:07:01

Have You Noticed?

Has any one noticed how meaningless our conversations and daily lives have become. We talk just to talk. We have no reason to talk any more other than to fill an empty void.

18 11 176 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-19T16:13:07

CST!!!!!!

Yayyy!!. I'm so excited right now. We, the minor citizens of the state of California get the pleasure of taking the star test every year. How lucky am I?!. Haha wish me luck..

4 6 33 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-18T06:45:49

Tigress

She prowled around me as the flames jumped from tree to bush to branch, an evil glint in her eyes showed that she knew she would be winning this game we had started.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-17T18:54:23

Untitled

I think I broke it. It's no longer fluttering and pounding and stuttering when i think about you. It doesn't even seem to have a faint beat. Can you fix it, good sir.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-17T05:09:33

How Could You?!?

How could you hurt me so bad. How could you lie right tiny face knowing what it would do to me. Your laughing. That's funny to you. My pain is your pleasure?!. No, I understand.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-17T03:01:35

Fakers!!!!!!

I hate you guys so much. Ok I don't, but I hate your attitudes. I hate it when you complain about your status going down.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-16T18:48:11

Just Curious

What are your stands on abortion?.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-16T04:09:04

Help!!!!

How, prey tell, do I over come this sudden block..

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serenityeverard
2012-04-14T22:05:59

Purely For Conversation.

Guys I'm kind of confused in a very umm...touchy subject. I don't want people to feel uncomfortable about this, but can you please explain what's so amazing about religon.

16 112 35 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-14T06:23:13

How Cute!!!!

Haha. So this guy im talking to keeps falling asleep mid conversation. It's kinda adorable. I wonder what he dreams about. I bet he dreams about his family. Good night sleepy head. :).

8 6 33 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-14T00:17:34

0.o

Yeah....so I just died. Kinda. It's pouring rain here, which is exceptional enough since it never rains here. But on top of the odd weather there is the exceptional thunder storm.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-13T21:33:09

Are You Serious?

I am dying here. I can't write. Nothing's coming out..

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serenityeverard
2012-04-13T21:31:48

Are You Serious?

I am dying here. I can't write. Nothing's coming out..

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serenityeverard
2012-04-13T06:17:06

Just To Let You Know...

So umm I'm over my little hissy fit that I threw earlier. Im sorry for my stupid behavior. I hope you'll all forgive me.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-13T05:53:31

Untitled

Jamie-hey check out the ingredients on everything you eat. Samuel-...everything. Jamie- yep. You have no idea what's in your food these days.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-12T20:27:28

Im Sorry

I'm sorry that I'm not perfection personofied. In sorry im not the child you've dreamed of. Im sorry that im not the cause of your happiest moments.

8 14 66 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-12T06:06:32

Ok...so

I just wanted to say that I'm really greatful to all of you who have given my family such good wishes. They all went to bed, so I'll start concentrating on writing the next bit of WYBA.

8 4 60 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-11T20:25:20

I'm So Sorry

Hey every on. I just wanna apologize now, I'm not gonna be able to write that second chapter today cus my mom and dad both have pneumonia.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-11T08:52

KIK Any One?

So I like to meet new people, so if anyone else is as bored or social feeling then feel free to message me on Kik messager. Serenityeverard.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-11T07:21:45

Within Your Bitter Arms Ch.1

So this is the first part of that story I was talking about. I hope you like it. As always give me feed back. Criticize me as harshly as you can.

18 26 523 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-11T04:29:58

Big Baby!!!

Ok. I'm a big baby. You know the movie "Casper: seeing is believing". Well....I just bawled my eyes out at the end of the movie. Oh and btw. I'm in love with Casper.

8 4 41 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-11T02:55:40

VHS's!!!!

So today I've been watching movies. But not just any movies. I've been watching my old VHS tapes!!!. I'm so excited about them. I think everyone should go to their TVs and pop one in there. Enjoy!.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-11T00:30:16

A Painful Joy

I guess love is a divine torture. It is the most powerful and most vulnerable state that a person can ever be in.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-10T22:04:01

Ok So...

I'm writing a new story guys and it's not short like the other one I posted the other day. So I need help on making a decision. Should I add it in pieces or add it once I've completed the whole...

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serenityeverard
2012-04-10T08:13:42

Cats

If your getting a puppy get a kitten as well. Surprisingly enough they are amazingly compatible because of how different they are.

8 11 107 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-10T08:01:19

Character

Character is doing the right thing when nobody's looking. There are too many people who think that the only thing that's right is to get by, and the only thing that's wrong is to get caught." ~J.C.

8 0 38 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-10T03:50:40

Untitled

We lose the people we love because they are meant to love someone else. We lose them because we are destined to find somebody else.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-10T03:45:01

Wow!!!!

Wow. Guys you have no idea how great this makes me feel!!!. Knowing that I've shot up from 1090 to 211 in two days makes me feel golden. Thank you everyone for making me so happy today.

4 3 42 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-09T08:04:53

Letting Go.

How do I do it. How do I release my hold on what I think is mine. What I know was mine. When did it stop being mine. Why did I lose my grasp. Why did I let go for so long.

2 2 119 words
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serenityeverard
2012-04-09T02:17:49

The Reason

The reason people find it so hard to be happy is that they always see the past better than it was, the present worse than it is, and the future less resolved than it will be – Marcel Pagnol..

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serenityeverard
2012-04-09T01:57:08

A Thought

I was just listening to a country song by the jets, minding my own dang business, and I thought to myself, "Self, why is the world so fake.

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serenityeverard
2012-04-09T01:41:30

The Field

Hi there guys, this is my first entry, so I hope you like it. If you don't, tell me please!!!. Ha and if you do...tell me too. Thanks.

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