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Acid Rain

So I'm sitting and feeling the strain
Wondering whose to blame
Living life in the fast lane
Chasing dreams always something to gain

Your love is like acid rain
Rotting at my brain
driving me insane

Working hard making a living
being the only one doing the giving
Your eyes looking at me quizzing
I'm still not capable of forgiving

Your love is like acid rain
Rotting at my brain
driving me insane

I'm washed up and broken
Your love was no more than a token
The dreams are gone and realities woken
The truth between us still not spoken

Your love is like acid rain
Rotting at my brain
driving me insane

You were the one that lied
Because of you a man died
crocodile tears fell as you cried
Retributions arrived nowhere left to hide

Your love is like acid rain
Rotting at my brain
driving me insane

Now this day I'm gonna shine
I've opened my eyes no fooling me this time
This a payback for your crime
An eye for an eye a life taken in its prime.

(Sorry it's so long! Should be read in a rap kinda style)

sjw

@sjw

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Comments & Feedback (37)

@AWriterGirl 😳

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ ooh I love the chorus! Singing that to myself in kinda Avril Lavigne style though which is scary 😱 but good 😘

If I put a kinda heavy beat behind the verses it's really rappy... I'm certainly no expert though 😳 and I should go to sleep πŸ’€

@naaviie lmao! I was hoping for maybe a Professor Green or Plan B, but hey your singing it so that's a bonus πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚I'm not complaining 😘

Ooooh plan b yeh that would be good...! I'll read it again in the morning when I'm less tired me thinks. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜πŸ’€

@naaviie ok nyt babe 😘😘

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@RichWithey ok, I'll go with that, I was tempted to say Eminem but wasn't sure he'd appreciated the likeness pmsl, I did it a bit tongue in cheek πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I'm feeling kinda proud now..thank you 😊x

@RichWithey oh and mwaah for the RP 😘

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@RichWithey I like that title 😜 x

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Love it and singing itπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€β€

Awesome.

I love how I'm getting others to write some songs and I enjoy reading them :)

Could be a song!

Great stuff sienna πŸ‘β€ I had it in a Linkin Park style β€πŸ’‹

Everyone is getting so lyrical lately! Great flow!πŸŒŸπŸ’—πŸŒŸ

Awesome rapπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŽ€πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜„πŸ˜ƒ

I read as prof green style rap very well written Sienna πŸ’œ

Fabulous 🎢🎡🎢🎡❀❀❀❀❀

@sarahgamal thank you Sarah and have some 🍦🍦🍦for the RP 😘😘

@AWriterGirl thank you and yes it's a really cool challenge πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@candyland_massacre thank you for the RP πŸ˜˜πŸ’

@leelee101 ok Linkin Park is good hun, thank you for the RP hunni 🍦🍦🍦😘😘

@ckahn thank you! It's a cool challenge have some πŸ’πŸ°πŸ¦for the RP 😘

@Stablish thank you hun and mwaah for the RP πŸ¦πŸ°πŸ’—πŸ˜˜

@sara_lou thanks Sara have some πŸ’for the RP 😘

@misslittleDHP thank you kim have some πŸ’πŸ°πŸ¦πŸ“πŸ“πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸΈfor the RP 😘

@sjw cheers Hun πŸ˜˜πŸ’œ

Awesome again!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@naaviie thank you nic I'm honoured you read it again and mwaah for the RP 😘😘

@sjw brilliant rap my darling! I'm reading it in the style of mc hammer! Hope you don't mind πŸ‘πŸ˜˜xxx

@gazplend pmsl! Now your showing your age!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ xx

😘😘for the RP x

Reload it!

@pthasse haha thanks for the RP 😘

@martinos74 can I enter this one?

@sjw sounds good to me! Keep them coming!

@martinos74 thank you ill see what I can do thanks for the RP 😘

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