My Brother.

sjw • 1138 followers

I miss you still
I am happy your life was full
I loved your thirst and drive
I loved that you always strived
I loved that you were so positive
I loved that you took everything in
Your stride
But most of all I loved that you were
my big brother!

Would you have wanted things differently?
I don't think so......

You were my hero
You always kept me safe
You made your own rules
You were passionate for life
You were a vanguard for truth
You gave your time to others
You had a heart as soft as feathers
You loved your bike and couldn't
Have known one day it would take
Your life.

#general #grief #memorial-poem #remembrance #sibling-loss #tribute

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Comments & Feedback (41)

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:17 PM

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Jun 12, 2012 at 4:27 PM

Awww, so sad and beautiful! :( btw. Is this true?

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:31 PM

Sad. A touching tribute hunny 🌹

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:34 PM

@coolioXP thank you, have you enabled it in your settings? 😊

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:35 PM

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Jun 12, 2012 at 4:35 PM

@meggie2012 thank you sweety and yes it's true 🙍

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:35 PM

@leelee101 thanks babe 😽

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:38 PM

😭💔 I couldn't live without my brother D':

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:38 PM

Can't find right words to say, so just sending you 😥😚❤ instead x

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:39 PM

@coolioXP I'm on iPad but I'm assuming it's the same go to settings find keyboard then add it there you may need to switch your device off and back on for it to take affect ☺

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:41 PM

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Jun 12, 2012 at 4:41 PM

@sjw omg, I'm so sorry. :( :( :( :( :( :( :( this is a beautiful poem :( :( :( :( :( :(

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:43 PM

@coolioXP weird! 😽

Jun 12, 2012 at 4:44 PM

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Jun 12, 2012 at 4:47 PM

@IndiaSparrow @Fly10 it was a while ago but he's been in my thoughts a lot lately thank you for your kind words 😽😽💞💞

Jun 12, 2012 at 5:11 PM

@sjw 😢😔😞😥 very sad babe 😘💙

Jun 12, 2012 at 5:11 PM

@sjw That is beautiful. Sure he'd be proud🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Jun 12, 2012 at 5:25 PM

@sjw Beautifull,he would definitely be very proud of you,just like I am 😘🌹

Jun 12, 2012 at 5:44 PM

Sad but beautiful 💙💛

Jun 12, 2012 at 6:17 PM

@smellyfingers sad but he enjoyed his life and that makes me happy 😽

Jun 12, 2012 at 6:18 PM

@DuRoLuRo thanks hun and for the repost 😽

Jun 12, 2012 at 6:19 PM

@gazplend awww thanks hunni bun and I appreciate the repost 😽😽x

Jun 12, 2012 at 6:20 PM

@HeatherAnne thank you 💞

Jun 12, 2012 at 7:35 PM

A massive hug...such a lovely poem about your brother...an emotional write my sweet...beautifully written xxxxxxxxx

Jun 12, 2012 at 7:44 PM

@misslittleDHP thank you hun and for the repost hug gratefully received xxx

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:07 PM

@sjw sadly beautiful 🌹🌹🌹🌹

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:10 PM

@TheViolator thank you hun x

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:17 PM

@sjw your welcome babes 🌹🌹

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:20 PM

🌹🌹🌹 Beautifully written 🌹🌹🌹

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:29 PM

Superb poem really heartfelt and sad 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:38 PM

@Stablish thank you hun and for the repost 😚

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:38 PM

@glen 😚

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:40 PM

@milkeyedmender thank you for the repost ☺

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:53 PM

Dont really know what to say 😥 but this is a really beautiful poem 🌺📝 and im sure your big bro is very proud of you 🎉👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 ✨🌟❤😊

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:55 PM

@sguga awww thank you, I hope so and thanks for the repost ☺

Jun 12, 2012 at 9:57 PM

@sjw u deserve it! ✌

Jun 12, 2012 at 11:28 PM

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Jun 13, 2012 at 2:55 AM

Oh my gosh! So sad but really besutif😪😪

Jun 13, 2012 at 2:56 AM

Oops! Beautiful not whatever that was

Jun 13, 2012 at 7:25 AM

@RichWithey thanks hun 😚

Jun 13, 2012 at 7:26 AM

@ckahn thank you sweetie ☺

Jun 13, 2012 at 8:11 PM

Very sad, but inspirational writing.

Jun 13, 2012 at 8:43 PM

@Munford thank you and for the repost sweetie 😽

Jun 14, 2012 at 12:09 PM

Beautiful and so heart touching! 👉❤😢

Jun 14, 2012 at 12:18 PM

@Shandie thank you 💞

Jun 14, 2012 at 12:41 PM

@sjw u r very welcome dear💚💜💙

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