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Tragedy

Based on Shakespeare's Macbeth

Three witches sat and predicted,
something that would make his heart sing.
On the eve of a dark thunderstorm, they
foretold of the time he was to be king.

His greed of wealth and power,
grew darker by the hour. Driven on by a
twisted and evil wife, they plotted on
ending another's life.

The dastardly deeds were done, after
which they started to come undone.
A ghost appeared only to him, twisting
His tongue as his hands he wrung.

All around appeared blind, as it slowly
twisted his tormented mind. The blood on
her hands became to much. Taking her
own life, he no longer felt his wife's touch.

With no time left to contemplate, his
life ended by the one he deemed unfit. Here
Macbeth your story ends one of ambition,
treachery, deception and fate.

sjw

@sjw

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@Clairabethey

Did you write this?

Yes but it's based on Shakespeare's story I've just condensed it lol ☺

This is brilliant, so cool. "there to meet upon the heath..." 🐧🐧🐧

@sjw you made my fav Shakespeare story even better😄 love it 💗

Macbeth is my fave Shakespeare....this is a fabulous write my sweet...perfect😍😘😍😘

@sjw made it your own babe! Very clever write 👍😘😘

Awesome job! Haven't read Macbeth yet, but I get to for school next year ☺💙

It's like Reduced

It's like Reduced Shakespeare!

@Clairabethy thank you hun and for the RP 😽

@minxyMolly thank you sweety, it's my fav too with othello a close 2nd 😽

@minxyMolly thank you for the RP 😽

@misslittleDHP thank you glad I picked this one now ☺ and mwaah for the RP xx

@gazplend thank you babe ☺ and for the RP😽❤

@natalee thank you, at least you have an idea of the story now 💞❇

@VikingHorn I'll take that as a compliment then thank you ☺

@unsuitableguy thank you for the RP 😽

Perfect write to sum up the tragic story💙

@ashhkat thanks for reading it 💞❇

@sjw As well you should!

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