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Velvety earth underneath my flaming soles,
Sprinkled wet with raindrops full of sorrows;
Amidst unripe carpets of hissing bluegrass,
Shivery air; brackish sudor turned crystals.

Heeding to the hymns of guiding sparrows,
To where it leads appears opaque and narrow;
Nimbus shifts to darkest as I glance farther,
Yet no storm nor space shall cause me to falter.

Clasped with haloed eagles, enticed by majestic robes;
Vanished with no traces towards a carved golden throne.
Jar of rainbows broken, signet rings consumed by rust;
Forsaken and forgotten, betrothment turned to dust.

The road onwards seeming endless, wearying to tread;
Yet my wishings remain, as solemn prayers are said --
Our paths to cross, eyes to meet, lips once again to kiss;
Souls, hearts entwined -- a journey to everlasting bliss.

Β©danabelle 10.11.12

softwhispers

@softwhispers

A woman who weaves deep emotions into words, dictated by her heart, felt by her soul, whispered softly in a poem.

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Love this πŸ‘πŸ’—πŸ˜˜

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@TaintedTulip thanks for reposting..πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’š

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@RichWithey thank you Rich..glad you liked it..πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜πŸ’š

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Bravo πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€β€β€β€

This is almost hypnotic to read...it's flows with beautiful, descriptive words....wondrous πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€

@softwhispers love this pam! Great descriptions and imagery,Beautifull β€πŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ˜˜

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Fantastic imagery in this one πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Awesome Pam πŸ‘β€ seriously lovely 😍😍🌹

@sarahgamal @tetti2 @MrsS thank you lovely ladies, also for reposting..πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

@gazplend @leelee101 thank you gentlemen, and for the reposts too..πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

@misslittleDHP aw thank you..☺ glad you liked it..πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’ and hugs for the repost..πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ’š

@VikingHorn..thank you sir for the repost..πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜πŸ’š

Fantastic poem! πŸ‘ Bravo!

@pthasse thank you for the kind comment..☺ I appreciate the repost..πŸ˜˜πŸ’š

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