17 April 2012
I realised by trying to do this I was biting off way more than I could chew. I have been over it a few times, it has rhymes to it but it still sounds weird. Any suggestions what style it is would be appreciated. I really am a complete novice at poetry and I would love the advice, thanks. (-:
Everything moves in an infinite loop.
So don't be afraid,
Don't go out there and loot!
Everything moves in an infinite loop.
So go out today,
Don't forget, search for truth.
Everything moves in an infinite loop.
So don't sit there and stay.
Don't give up looking there's proof.
Everything moves in an infinite loop.
So try to find a new way,
Don't waste more youth.
Everything moves in an infinite loop.
So take time to play,
Don't be blind to life's hoops.
Everything moves in an infinite loop.
XSTABLISHX
Infinite Loop's • Opuss № I