19 July 2012

Song I just wrote. Title help and opinions please?

You keep keep twisting your words They never go unheard Why pick on me What have I done To make you treat me so horribly?

Why do you insist On being a prick And why must you beat All those in your sight

Oh I wish you'd change for the better And how it'd be a load off On not only you but the world as well

Chorus: why don't you change And find out What might become from it all? Please oh please listen to me I only want you tobe the best you can be

Follow your heart, my darling Make the right choice, Don't hurt yourself in the rush of it all Be yourself if you accomplish Any of your dreams

Chorus: why don't you change And find out What might become from it all? Please oh please listen to me I only want you to be the best you can be

Oh here me out, my sweetheart You have so much value But will you try Or will you cry Please keep on going for me

Chorus: why don't you change And find out What might become from it all? Please oh please listen to me I only want you to be the best you can be

TaintedTulipOpuss № I