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Brian----------------------

"Hey, Chelsea, hunnie! well done, one question: how did you do it?" I spoke into my phone, getting quieter at the end,
"it was quite easy actually, first I asked of she wanted a 'poisoned' drink," Chelsea said, pausing for a long while,"Oh,no!" she murmured, the phone line went dead.
I switched on the news, this made my mouth drop.
"Sally Brown, was murdered in a small seaside cabin, at 12-midnight, the suspects of this crime are Brian Greens, her ex boyfriend who has been in prison for thieving, and the other suspect is Chelsea Barns, both suspects age 22 and Sally is age21. She is in intensive care, the doctors and other medical staff have tried to get her heart beating, but she needs a new liver. Let's hope Sally gets better soon, over to you Matt"
oh damn,
Great. I was all over the news, as well as Chelsea.
"Hey babe," I said dialling into the phone Chelsea's no. "Will you come round to mine, I need to ask you something," I said reaching into my pocket to reveal a velvet box which had a 2cm diamond ring in it. It was Sally's.

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Comments & Feedback (26)

Great! This is amazing! The one thing is that it said that Sally had been murdered but she was still alive in intensive care..?

Yeh exactly

@meggie2012 @Dj_Mac she has been murdered, but she is in intensive still, since she arrived at the hospital from being murdered. Thanks anyway.... :)

@meggie2012 btw it doesn't say she's alive

WRITE MORE!!!!

Huh ? Theyre trying to save her live but she's dead

It says let hope Sally gets better soon ?

Thts confusing. It says she was murdered then it says hope she gets better soon

It does say she's alive

@Dj_Mac erm.... No I don't think it does :L

You spelt murderers wrong

@meggie2012 @Dj_Mac @lucandsurprise @Pygmypuff the next One's up now so you can check for: spelling mistakes, and other thing I've 'done' wrong in it :) lol

@Pygmypuff @Dj_Mac Guys get off her back!! It's her story not yrs! 😠

It does

I know but I'm just confused ?

@lucandsurprise THANKYOU!! :D

@lucandsurprise haha! Thanks :)

@tattyteddy welcomes! ;)

YES!!!!!

@lucandsurprise @Dj_Mac @Pygmypuff the next one is out now :) enjoy.....

Please dont feel like I'm ganging up on you I just want to ask is Sally dead or alive

@Girlbobo who's Sally?

The one who has been murdered?

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