23 September 2012
Chapter 11: Lucas Pain
They vanished. I fell to the floor and hugged my knees. Was that what Lucifer wanted me to see or did that just happen? I came to the conclusion that it had just happened. It was going to get a whole lot worst from here. After about an hour I stood up. I needed Jane like I needed air. She was my life and I wasn’t going to let anyone take her away. I ran to the door and passed through to the fifth stage of hell. Four more to go and I would be with Jane forever… Chapter 12: Jane The devils girl I couldn’t believe I had betrayed Lucas like that. What was I? I could think of a few good answers to that… A cow. A monster. A beast. A dragon. An angel hurter. A devil… Wait… that was what I was. That one word described me perfectly ‘a devil.’ I deserved to be in hell just not with the devil. I shouldn’t be loved I didn’t deserve it. “Yes. You are aren’t you? My little devil.” Lucifer laughed. I sighed. Yep. This was my fate… an eternity in hell.
Chapter 13: Lucas Love can change a person The first thing I noticed was the awful smell. Rotting flesh. I choked down a mouthful of vomit. Then I saw miles and miles of swamp. There was a lake of dark green, glowing water and hundreds of bowing trees that had been stripped of their bark. A loud bang rippled thought out the woods. I jumped as two hands grabbed my shoulders and threw me back. I looked up and saw Henry. “Henry? What? Why are you here?” I asked. “Seriously. Your still blinded by love.” He laughed evilly. “What? I don’t understand” I said confused by his choice of words. “I’m here to stop you” he replied. “But why” I asked angry “Because I hate you. You talked me into fighting Lucifer and I lost Amy. Now I have her back. And you want to get her taken away from me again” my jaw dropped. “Wait… you have her back?” I stammered “Lucifer said if I follow him and stop you, I can have her” “Have you seen her yet?” I asked “No” henry confessed “He won’t let you have her henry” I shouted. “He will. And you never told me you were his son. All this time I was grieving and you knew he was your father. That’s sick” he replied harshly. “I didn’t know” I promised “Your father has a different idea” Henry hissed “Well he’s wrong. And do you know what he’s doing to Jane?” Henry shook his head “No you don’t do you? He’s killing her. He broke her arm the other day. What will he do tomorrow? What will he do today?” “He broke her arm big deal” Henry shouted in my face. I got up ready to punch him. “He threw her across the floor in front of me. She was covered in blood.” I screamed “Why didn’t you protect her then? Oh I forgot you’re not her guardian angel anymore. You’ve sided with Lucifer now. Your part of the fallen.” I threw a punch at him but he caught my arm. “I’ll kill you.” I screamed “Haven’t you heard you can’t be killed in hell? Ha-ha only tortured. Let’s settle this on earth you can kill me and start your little mission again. Or I can go to Lucifer and request to see Jane. What should I do to her? A slight punch or should I use a hammer.” He chuckled “Even he wouldn’t let you do that” I replied but still fearful. “You underestimate my authority.” He smiled “So what exactly is your demon rank?” I hissed “My demon rank? Hmmm… well I guess you could say a prince of demons.” “How long?” I asked, now incredibly fearful for Jane’s life “Years. About 7 years. But the whole ‘stop Lucas’ thing is quite new actually.” “You can’t hurt Jane!” it was more of a beg than a statement. “I can. I will” He couldn’t. He wouldn’t. “I won’t let you.” Henry laughed and grabbed my next and lifted me off the ground. “Good luck with that. It will be pretty easy to get to her, she knows me. She thinks I’m a good guy.” All of a sudden he dropped me and huge wings popped out from henrys back, only they weren’t white. They were black and featherless. “Bye Lucas. Don’t t worry I won’t be able to kill only torture. Oh and do you have any last words for her? Being tortured by two demons might just be enough to break her hope and faith in you” Then he flew away. I needed to warn Jane. Jane? A few seconds of silence went by Jane? Ha-ha. Have you only just realised you can’t talk to her anymore? Lucifer thought I cut that off a while back. Just after we left you actually. Lucifer. Please I need to speak to her. Why? Going to tell her you love her? Tell her you want her back and that you will save her? No I’m not. Of course I love her, of course I want her and I will save her. But at the moment Henry is on his way there to torture her so I need to tell her to not trust him. So let me talk to her! What? You heard me! Henry, Prince of demons. Ha-ha that is funny. Really makes me laugh. He doesn’t stand a chance of getting close to Jane. I don’t even let my demon friends get close to Jane. You really think I don’t know what he does? You don’t have to worry about henry but you have to worry about me. What’s that supposed to mean? He didn’t answer. What was I going to do? I needed to rush now…
Chapter 14: Jane fight I sat up from my bed. I heard familiar voices, they were arguing. Who was it? “She needs to be killed. Right in front of him. Make him regret he even spoke your name with attitude.” One man said “You won’t lay a hand on her” Lucifer hissed. “Henry I could kill you in a second don’t defy me by going in there.” The door opened and I looked at henry. “Henry?” I asked “Arrrr… princess leviathan. Nice to see you again.” “Princess Leviathan?” “Ohhh… he’s not married you yet? I thought he’d jump at the chance to marry his son’s girlfriend” what was going on? Henry walked over to me and grabbed me back the neck, lifting me up. Wait… henry was trying to kill me. But he was Lucas’s friend. What was happening? Lucifer walked in and ran towards henry. He threw him to the floor before picking me up and putting me behind him. “She’s mine. I told you not to defy me.” Henry ran for me, but Lucifer grabbed him and started to punch him violently. “You… evil… Little… demon… I’ll… kill… You!” Lucifer said between punches. All of a sudden they disappeared. I blinked a couple of times to make sure I wasn’t seeing things. They were gone. I hoped henry would come back because he could take me to Lucas, but I also wanted Lucifer to come back because he wouldn’t let Henry kill me. I ran and got changed. I paced the floor for at least 2 hours before Lucifer appeared in front of me with a body bag. My eyes widened as I stared at the bag. But I found myself saying something I didn’t expect. “Thank you” “You’re welcome princess. Killing people is my talent.” He replied “No. I mean for saving me. You pulled me away” “There’s better ways to thank me and it’s not with words.” He kissed me and I kissed him back. I could feel his tongue forcing my lips apart but I refused, I couldn’t do that. ”Your starting to love me Jane, soon you won’t even know who that Lucas guy is.” I sighed “I will always remember him.” I said “Doubt it. One day soon you will forget. I promise. You won’t even have to think about him, you will have me” I sighed again. “I don’t love you, I love him” I said, but it didn’t come out like that, it came out as “I don’t love him, I love you” he smiled. “I love you too princess.” This time when he kissed me I surrendered. His kiss was urgent and I felt like I needed him. He broke off. “I haven’t even asked you properly” he sighed, dropped the body bag and got down on one knee. “I love you Jane. Will you marry me?” My heart stopped. I couldn’t say yes. I didn’t want to. “I’m sorry, but no” I replied. I was silently hoping the words would come out right and they did. He sighed. “I’ll ask you again in a few days from now. I’ll see what you say then.” He got up, picked up the bag and grabbed my wrist. I felt pain shoot up my arms. “You will change your mind Jane. I know you will. Until then get your room, I’ll come and find you in a while.” I felt like a kid being told off, as I walked away…
Chapter 15: Lucas Love never dies, but It hurts like hell Lucifer! I though. I had been screaming his name for what seemed like hours, while I walked through the swamp. I started to cry. Where was he? Lucifer. I screamed again, but he didn’t answer. Maybe something had happened to Jane… maybe Lucifer let him near her. I ran. I needed to know if she was ok. Then I saw a light. It blinded me for a few seconds. The ball of light glowed in the darkness like a candle. I stopped running and reached out. I saw her. Jane. I saw her kiss me and then Lucifer. I also saw her future. What it would be like with me? Jane looked much older now and so did I. She hugged three young children and kissed them goodnight as they climbed into their beds. All three children were girls and they all had beautiful white angel wings. Their hair was red and they all had glowing green eyes. The angel children were beautiful. I stood outside the door. She smiled and kissed me. Her hand, she had a ring, she was my wife and they were my children. I smiled, then took her hand and led her to our room. I couldn’t ask for anything else. This was what I wanted. Then I saw her life with Lucifer. Jane stood with Lucifer and two children. These children had dark black eyes and awful featherless wings. Their hair was a black colour. I stood before them. Suddenly Lucifer grabbed Jane’s hair and threw her to the floor. The children looked horrified. I felt sorry for them, even if they were the devils children. I realised why she was being hurt. She had found a way to talk to me, like she promised she would. I called the children to come to her. They did. I stood with Jane and the children; she took my hand and promised she’d be ok. ‘I beg you. Take care of them Lucas’ she cried, I nodded and kissed her, but I was cut off as Lucifer dragged her away and threw her into a pit of fire. Tears streamed down my face. That vision I had was awful and amazing at the same time. I knew if I got Jane out of hell I would have the first life. A life I wanted, a lif
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