29 July 2012
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Chapter 19: Lucas Brother eddy Once I was past the dead bodies all I could see was rock. Bright red rock shaped like tall coca-cola bottles. I walked for miles until I found a small door. It was hidden away in the rocks but I could still see it. I opened the door and stepped in… A knife passed me and missed me by inches. I looked around to see where the knife had come from but found a horrific sight instead. People hung by their necks from trees, men with bloody t-shirts ran around with knives and killed people, mini wars took place around the battle field like place and men threw knifes every passing person. I wondered for a while how I was going to pass this crowd of people until I knew what to do. I had to run. I needed to find a door and run. But all I could see was endless fields of blood red grass. I had 24 hours to get through three stages of hell. Ask someone! My head shouted. I looked around to find a group of gangsters. My brain decided on a plan. You could take them if they tried to kill you. Yeah but there is six of them. You can take them No. no I can’t. Yes. Yes you can. While my brain argued with itself I decided I would go and ask them. I needed to act hard. “Oi!” I shouted over to the gang. “What?” one of them replied. Great now what do I say? Look for clues Lucas. My brain shouted. I looked at their clothes first then their hands. They had rings and… cigarettes. I didn’t smoke but realising I had wasted too much time; I decided to go with it. “Mate… you have a cigarette on ya?” I asked in the best gangster accent. “No, clear off this is our turf” Thank god, I didn’t want to smoke that vile thing. But what do I say now? “Ey… I’m new here and-” One of the guys cut me off. He stood up. “We don’t want your life story mate. Get lost” “I want to know a way out” I said in my normal voice. “Ha. Knew you weren’t the gang type. I mean look at you, you ain’t really cut out for the streets.” The guy turned to his friends “Hey guys, pretty boy wants to know a way out.” They all laughed. “What you wanna know that for? Ey” “I need to get to Lucifer” “You need to get to Lucifer” He mimicked “Why? You don’t look like one of his demons” “No. I’m not, I’m his son and he has my girlfriend!” I shouted “His son? Your girlfriend? Ha then you must be the heroic Lucas” He smiled and laughed when he said heroic. How did he know my name? Then he came out with something I didn’t expect “Well hello brother” “Brother?” I asked “Well that’s nice. Don’t even recognise you brother Eddy” He laughed “Your my brother?” “Well duhhhh. Anyway bro where’s your sweet little wings?” They all laughed like it was the funniest thing they had ever heard but I just snapped. “Apparently falling in love with humans isn’t classed as good in the rule book” “Ha” “Tell me how to get out!” I growled “Why should I?” “Because I don’t have time to talk to you” “One condition” “What’s that?” At that moment I would have done anything to get to Jane. “If you get through to the top, tell him my name” Eddy said “He doesn’t know your name?” “Course he does stupid! just tell him to come and see me” He shouted “I will” I shouted, with a plea in my voice. “You betta” “Where’s the exit to this stage?” I begged “See that blood red tree over there?” I nodded “Climb to the second branch and you’ll find what you’re looking for” I walked off not bothering to thank him. I climbed the tree and just like my so called brother Eddy had said I found what I was looking for. There was a hole in the tree that could not be seen from below. I crawled in and knew I was going to the next stage.
AN ANGEL IN HELL. CHAPTER 19 • Opuss № I