24 September 2012
Hey, This is my new story 'BEAUTIFUL LOVE' please enjoy it and tell me what you think. The first chapter is pretty small.
Beautiful love Chapter 1
I sat in the class room counting don’t the minutes until the final bell. Only a few seconds left. 10… 9…8…7…6…5…4…3…2…1 RING RING. Finally, I got up and walked out of the classroom. My eyes felt droopy and all I wanted to do was sleep. When I finally arrived at home, I found the door was slightly open. My mum and dad were at work and my sister was usually at school, at this time of day. Were they home? I pushed on the door slowly and walked in. “Hello? Anyone here?” I made my way into the living room and saw… nobody. Why was the door open in the first place? I turned around to check the rest of the house and I was hit by something heavy, it knocked me to the ground. A crow bar? Oh my gosh. He swung it again and I moved out of the way just in time. I’m going to die. I screamed as loud as I could. “Get off her” Shouted a boy around my age. Why was he in my house? Forget that, he’s saving you! The boy hit the man and he just passed out cold. Just like that, wow strong boy. The boy had short brown hair and dark brown eyes. His lips were perfect and he had defined check bones. Hot! “Thank you!” I exclaimed! He looked at me and smiled. “Call the police” He said softly before he started to run off. “Wait” But he was gone. I ran to my phone and started to dial the number. “Hello. I’ve just been attacked” I gave them my name and address and they were here within 5 minutes “He’s in there” I whispered. They walked him out in handcuffs. “Thank you” “Any time. You should be safe now” I nodded and they left. Who was the boy? I’d never seen him before. Will I ever see him again? Please dear god let me see him again. I sat down on my couch, on edge now and watched some not at all scary TV…
BEAUTIFUL LOVE CHAPTER 1 • Opuss № I