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Little boy look at how you've grown.
Look at all the shiny things you own.

But,

I know that your not satisfied.
With all your dreams
I made you set aside.

I did'nt want to change your plan.
Turn you into a mournful man.

And now you're such a pessimist.
Wondering if hope exists.

You talk about the people I dismissed.
Hate me for all the things you've missed.

And all the psycho girls you kissed.
I never once helped you resist.

If I was you I'd turn your back on me.
Forget your gut and go with plan B.

But guess what?
I'm all you have.
I know that sounds rather sad.

I'm sorry I never let you cry.
I said suck it up and you'd comply.

I left you searching for a home.
I never should have let you roam.

I should have let you keep in touch with your friends.
Instead of saying it does'nt matter who you offend.

I should have made you share some more.
You had a lot of problems that I made you ignore.

But at least you're no longer naive.
If something sounds too good, you always find it hard to believe.

But don't worry.
I still have some tricks up my sleeve.
Things that you would have never perceived.

I'm sorry I could'nt always stay true to you.
But when you we're down in the dirt, I would always come through for you.

And for all that I've wronged, I'll make it better.

So for you my younger self from the past...

I write this letter.

unsuitableguy

@unsuitableguy

A mystery inside of an enigma wrapped in a burrito...Kik - theunsuitableguy

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Comments & Feedback (10)

This is great, I can totally relate to this. Especially putting the dreams aside. Beautifully written 💗

Brilliant. Truly brilliant. 😍

Lump in your throat kinda stuff 😞 Oh, the benefit of hindsight...😌

Expertly written :)

Amazing, I love the twist. 😍

Thanks @weirdwolf and @Delilah for the repost.

@PoppyA thanks. I'm glad you can empathise.

@Fly10 @Irrational_Kimmi @jojo72 thanks for reading.

Astonishing honesty and humility if this is based on your life. If not, reads as beautiful fiction

@wolfie thanks. And yes this is based on my life.

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