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He Turns With Stars

He has a pavements for a mattress
And his pillow: his own crooked arm.
So tenderly it bears him on
To molten dreams of childhood

Some days he peels bruised fruit
Luxuriates in harbour sunsets
Reflecting New York's fingers
As they pick at libertarian sky

The satin fog's his nightgown
And skinny pyjamas monogrammed
With hardship/Winter friendship
This skin has room for two

He hums Giuseppe Verdi
And his music blooms in frost
At the rail works, there he spins
A single-malty waltz.

His stuffed shirt is
Up close and personal with
The personals; his Saviour
Falls between the agonies
And the racing results.

Lucky sufferings along the road
Of a life more free...
Smiles push up stubble
On his tired face

The blocks are his biographies
His roots the roads between.
A family tree of store-fronts
Leafy with greenbacks
Just out of reach.

The station bench his final rest
Departure late and unannounced.
Wrappers blow and sirens wail
Apt, but unaware of his passing

At last his shape conforms to general dust
The vagrant sky will bring him home
And he shall turn with common stars
He bunked with them for years.

wolfie

@wolfie

The Octoberman. All I need is a bottle of Talisker, a keyboard and you. Facebook: Nikarkham www.nikarkham.co.uk

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This is amazing :)

Thank you @minni92! Does it sound like a happy story to you?

@wolfie I thought it at first a sad story because of his way of living but when you read on It seems to me he is somewhat content and I like the ending. Its a happy ending. Unless I got it wrong haha

No right and wrong here, @minni92 , but I was thinking on the same lines as you

Lovely, I thought it ended with death though, did I misunderstand?

@crowncottage it does, yes. But it's the contented death of a tired wanderer

@wolfie yes, that's why I thought it was lovely. I see nothing wrong with a peaceful death. The piece was super, well done.

@wolfie I forgot to mention how impressed I was with the newspaper, the stubble, the skin parts, without repeating every section I wanted you to understand how effective I think it is.

Thank you @crowncottage - you're too kind. I'm always wary of being cliched or too obscure or sound like I'm trying to hard! To me, my writing falls down on all of those things!

@wolfie no, it's none of those things and I am not being kind!

That is a stunning title by the way!

@mrtimbobs Ta Tim. I Finked of it all by myself

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