29 March 2012
The old mans eyes where worn, his gray hair was a frizzy mess atop his head. As he walked through the streets of Cricket Creek many people laughed because of the way he looked, walked and smelt. They didn't know he looked that way because he was too poor to afford anything other than the necessary things like food, clothing and shelter. And he walked with a limp from the time he saved a young boy from a bear by taking on the bear himself, and they judged him by the way he smelt because he smelt like hard work... Something this generation had never smelt before.
So this is the beginning of my story "The Creator" I don't know if I should continue or not... Tell me what you think :)
The Creator • Opuss № I