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Tin Heart

I put up a front,
To stop people getting in.
Because whenever someone gets too close,
Bad things tend to happen.

I seem normal,
Happy and loving.
But if you really knew me,
You'd see inside I'm breaking.

I was doing so well,
The walls kept people out.
But then you came along,
And filled my world with doubt.

Whenever you were around,
I'd act an utter clown.
My walls were finally crumbling,
My front slowly coming down.

But was it such a bad thing?
When I let people in?
That depends if I can hold out,
My delicate heart made of tin.

© Emily Hay 25/9/2012

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I'm not the girl I used to be, I used to be free. I didn't care what anyone thought, I used to be me.

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The sentiment in this piece echoes my own heart....I let someone for the first time recently, it is painful when they break you but you gain a strength and learn a lesson(I hope)

@patdolan83 thank you 😊

What a beautiful poem filled with emotion- everyone can relate to this! Xx 👏

* thanks x

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