26 May 2012

Morning all. I've become a bit of a writing addict, an joined an online writing community called www.writing.com. Yesterday, I uploaded my first short storey and would love some feedback (good or bad).

Thanks in advance,

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1869808-Dragon-Point-Rock-1-3?rfrid=yd33

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