8 July 2012
(Plot: Mid Afternoon, In the woods, 1700s)
[SUSAN *Walks In the woods to collects Berries for her father and mother, as she walks she gets an eerie feeling as if someone was following her*
[Edward: *walks into woods to chop wood for his father*
[Susan: *sees a bush full of berries and runs to it* This has just enough berries for my family. *backs away from the bush and runs into A man holding an axe* AHHHH!
[Edward: SUSAN! hush!
[Susan: Edward? Why are you holding an axe?
[Edward: Wood..To burn. We are running out.
[Benjamin(Susan's father): HURRY UP WITH THOSE BERRIES!
[Susan: I should get going. I don't know how long we can keep sneaking around.
Edward: Well, maybe if you stood up to your parents--
Susan: THEY'LL HAVE MY KILLED!
Edward: but you dont love Alexander. You love me.
Susan: but my parents hate your family.
Edward: They've never gotten to know us!
Susan: what more is there to know? *Walks away*
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