Icy cold,
Take me alive.
Kill me with,
Your dagger of ice.
Snowdrifts build up,
I watch my breath crystallize.
Death will be upon me
When I close my eyes.
Forget everything,
My mind's slipping from me
And the last thing I hold on to
Are your memories.
I've tried to escape,
I've tried to hide.
It's time to face the music,
For real this time.
Love, I'm slowly dying
In the subzero layer
But I'll let you know I loved you
I really cared.
The polar tundra,
It's taking it's toll
As I drift away into darkness
I've never been so cold.
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@LittleMissSam I like this one better but I guess use whichever you want. I do know that in the past people are allowed to enter multiple pieces.
@AWriterGirl, Fantastic! Both entries are counted but you can't win two titles:) It's never been state but I think that's how it goes.
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