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This Was My First Song

AWriterGirl
AWriterGirl • 213 followers

Yes, the title is correct, this was my first song, and is not the best, through my eyes... Enjoy?

"Shine Like the Sun"

Elevate
Just a little bit higher
Appreciate
Your needs and desires

Let it all go
Because you know
Dreams aren't always what they seem
Get lost in the mystery

Oh oh
Sparks are flying
Oh oh
All around like lightning
Oh oh
There's magic in the air tonight
Just shine
Shine like the sun

Thats all I had.... I think I was 11. 6th grade.

#childhood-poetry #dreams #lyric #self-reflection #song-lyrics #teenage-creativity
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Comments & Feedback (8)

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 7, 2012 at 9:52 PM

That's a great song for someone who wrote it when they were 11. Why don't you take the song and expand it?

AWriterGirl
AWriterGirl
Sep 7, 2012 at 10:26 PM

@Davedave16 I actually have never done that! I'll try after I finish the song I'm working on

naaviie
naaviie
Sep 7, 2012 at 10:28 PM

Aw wow! You're a natural! 💚💚

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 7, 2012 at 10:29 PM

Cool

AWriterGirl
AWriterGirl
Sep 7, 2012 at 10:31 PM

@naaviie thanks! Lol, I didn't finish but I don't really want to. I don't even remember the melody.

naaviie
naaviie
Sep 7, 2012 at 11:35 PM

Leave it as it is, it was a stepping stone 😊

AWriterGirl
AWriterGirl
Sep 7, 2012 at 11:41 PM

@naaviie true!! 😃 btw, I entered your #emotion contest this round :)

naaviie
naaviie
Sep 7, 2012 at 11:42 PM

Thank you! I just saw it 😊😊

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