"A day without sunshine is like, you know, night" Steve Martin
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At which point I am struck by lightening. Repeatedly.
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@gazplend I never implied you weren't. I'm just in a good mood and decided to let you know through emoticonsπππ
@gazplend I suppose that is part of it, but the majority of it is the explanitive poem informing us on the great discovery of the Chinese Terracotta Army in 1764 :)
@BellaMaple omg it's so clear to me now! Your use of submersive text twinged with amphibious undertones creates an atmosphere of sheer cake! Love it ππππππππ
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