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Heaven

A place in the sky,
All cloudy and white,
Sun's always shining,
And it's never night,
Angels with white wings,
Floating around,
Fluffy White clouds,
Cover the ground,

Or

A never ending funfair,
Filled with colour and light,
Pink candy floss,
Such a wonderful sight,
Roller coasters galore,
That make you feel dizzy,
Lots of other rides,
To keep yourself busy,

Or

A tranquil stream,
Cool water, just right,
Set in a clearing,
Where the sun shines, so bright,
A tiny cottage,
To keep yourself warm,
Dreaming of hope,
Until the dawn,

Or

A giant hotel,
Five star of course,
Filled with lost souls,
And filled with remorse,
Dining room's full,
Of food, every day,
And now that you live here,
You can't go away,

Or

Nothingness,
That's it, you're dead,
Nothingness,
To fill your head,
Nothingness,
No light, no dark,
Nothingness,
No glowing spark.

Heaven is different,
To me and to you,
But you'll be remembered,
Whatever you do.

Bluegerbil

@Bluegerbil

I'm clumsy, clueless, insanely shy and generally a lunatic.

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Comments & Feedback (6)

Loved this 😉😘

A great write 👏👏👏 It highlights to me the fact that, whatever we believe, we are all here to do the best we can and to be remembered well. Taking the emphasis off our Human 'Rights' and shifting it to our Responsibilities ☺

@merlin1038 @MrsS Thankyoooou!!!!! :)

Great writing!

@nikujagagirl Thankyoooooou!! :)

@Bluegerbil You're welcome!

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