I have two possible endings for my story, Nightshade. I know which I like, (A) but I wanted to know which one YOU liked best. I won't give you the exact details, that would spoil the surprise, but I will tell you what is good and bad about each...
A:
Possibly a bit too predictable?
Gives room for a sequel.
B: A bit too dramatic?
Cliffhanger.
I have no idea on how to write a sequel from this!
Please comment with your preference!
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Ummm....B...? I think...if you could somehow make a sequel from the cliffhanger that would be great! Hmm...awesome drama or sequel (bound to be amazing)?
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