The eyes are the windows to the soul
But what if the eyes are black?
Does that mean the soul is foul?
Or shutters drawn against attack?
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Comments & Feedback (14)
@MrsS exactly what I meant 😃👍 someone appearing foul but really it could be defences built up waiting for right person to knock them down.. Was going to do more but when I tried I realised I had said all I wanted already 😲😂
@Burrfoot Sometimes a few words is all it needs, the rest is garnish 😉 I got you straight away 😚 I can come across a bit aloof / mean, etc sometimes - its only usually because I'm paranoid / find it difficult to get close to others, etc... Emotions mixed with personalities make for an interesting, complicated ride....! 😉😉😄😄😄
@MrsS I like it when folk get me 😄 most of us build taller walls the more mature we get (deleted 'older' there 😂) but often the higher the wall the more rewarding the prize behind.. Or maybe I just talk more bollocks as I age 😉
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