Should I do a part 7 of the rain of pain? Or leave it there?
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Hello, I am Callum, I am a British teenager. I love writing, reading and playing my guitar,ukulele and piano. I have a tortoise called Tallulah, I write romance and realistic books, some based on life experiences, I really hope you like what I write, because I'm sure I'll like what I read. Kik: CallumI01 Instagram:callumrfirvine
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Well, that's the paradox, he closed his eyes. But did he jump? There's several twists I'm looking into, maybe he's a phych patient and he is crazy, maybe he is already dead, maybe he is just dreaming, I don't know, what do you guys reckon should happen? :)
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