Sign In
Back

Confusion

Orange and blue,
Purple and yellow,
Rose and buttercup,
Angry and mellow.

Normal and strange,
Box and sphere,
Hand and foot,
Calm and fear.

Loud and quiet,
Small and large,
Drink and eat,
Walk and charge.

Love and hate,
Separate and fusion,
I have just,
Caused confusion.

Davedave16

@Davedave16

If life is an open door, why am I always trapped on the outside. With all this space around me and no where to go, no one to share it with. The cruel and unforgiving darkness becomes a blessing and my mind blurs the lines that others have set in place for me. I am at one with my self. I am at one with others. I am at one with the darkness. I am at one with the unknown.

100
Stories

Similar Stories

Comments & Feedback (12)

Great!! Love this!!!

@Janflower thanks ;)

There's a young writer's emotion now...? Better go enter...

This is cool, by the way :) like it 👍👍

@AWriterGirl thanks, yours'll probably b better

@AWriterGirl also, the youngwritersemotion was created like today, so its not incredibly huge at the mo. Unfortunately, come January I won't b able to enter any youngwriter contests :(

@Davedave16 same with me, only next July.. So I've got quite a bit of time..

Love this! I entered too! But your poem is wayyyyy better than my short story! Same here! No more youngwriter contests next June:(

Wow amazing! Love this :)

@Davedave16 mmmmmm very good, we'll see if you can do the double... ;-)

Similar Writers