'I will never let you go'
He said, while I shed a tear,
He remained calm though,
Like what he said was real,
First of all, he caused a fire,
Escaped before I even woke,
But his lies really inspired,
So I escaped before I could choke,
But once he flashed his eyes,
And made me fall in love,
I looked past his lies,
And I tried to be tough,
But once again he blew it,
Once I had gotten ill,
Sympathy he hadn't a bit,
After I had written my will.
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Her arms clamped around him. Like. A. Vice. Sucked out his common sense. It. Did. Entice. Felt very flattered. Thought. She. Cared. He was now trapped and. Un-. Pre-. Pared. No escape now for your.
We fight, everday of our lives, don't we, Lenore. We scream and tear and bite, arguments blocking out thunder. Yet when the time comes to decide, I keep running to be by your side.
Take the lead, take my hands, show me how you move. I'll be your work, heal my hurt, you can be my muse. Ease my doubts, when you speak with your silver tongue.
Love struck. Hit so hard. A stroke of luck. Let me feel. She's dry as stone. Makes me feel all alone. Desperate for a reaction. Want her to feel something. She feels nothing. Cold as a corpse.
I'll tear you up, Rip you apart, Play games with your heart. Chew you up, Spit you out, Show you what passion is all about. I tease and tease, Aim to please, Make you drop down on your knees.
Takes any boy that glances her way. Clutches tight in hopes he'll stay. Stays up on the phone with him. 'Til the velvety sky grows a morning-time dim. She writes love letters and lengthy poetry.
Today, you broke my heart, said you wanted to be apart. I didn't have any god damn choice, for you wouldn't hear my voice. The usual, it's not you but me, how stupid and blind could I be.
Part 4 "Ha. You remember now don't you?" his voice was as sharp as a knife, chilling the air. He straightened and flicked his inky black hair back. "Thought you'd done nothing wrong eh.
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