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Finding Love - Chapter 4

It was Sarah's fouteenth birthday and the only person she didn't wan't there was Alana. I wouldn't blame her though she had just been split up with her boyfriend because of Alana so not wanting her near her new boyfreind was understanable, after all she couldn't have two frienships (ok slightly more than frienship) broken by the same person. But you guessed it Alana was there anyway. Her intentions where good all she wanted to do was make it up to her little sister so she came and was ready for Sarah to come running through the door and give her sister a masive hug than say sory for being such a jurk and that she compleatly understood why Alana had said those things. But as you probibly guessed that didn't happen this is what did.
"Why are you here."
"Well forgive me for wan'ting to celibrate your 14th with you." said Alana.
"GET OUT!!!!" screemed Sarah "I DON'T WANT YOU RUINING THIS FOR ME!!!" She finnished.
"Thats not what i want and you know it!" Said Alana
"No amount of sweet talk will get you out of it big sister." Sarah said "Im not gulible like the care kids must have been! You have ruined my chances and im not even alowed to hate you for it? You are so horible!!!! Well your not the boss of me so im going to keep on hating you for another four months and then mums putting you back into care and i'll be free OF YOUR HORIBLE FACE!" she screemed.
"Thats a bit harsh." Alana replyed but she believed that Linda would actualy put her back into care after four months. As long as she didn't mention her old family she could go into care ans live life without Lilly-Ann. Just then Edward walkeked in.
"whats the matter Sarah?" he asked.
"Nothing" she replyed with an evil glare pointed directly at Alana. "when your here what could posibly go wrong?" she said focusing back on her boyfriend.
"Hey its your birthday, enugh about me."
"cool!"said Sarah as the guests started to arive "LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED!" she called and tured up the music she could tell it was winding Alana up and she was loving every minuet of it.
"YOUR EVEN WORCE THAN LILLY-ANN!" showted Alana. No one seemed to hear apart from Linda who was so suprised she whent to call the police and Edward who walked over to her ready for a conversation.
"So your the Lana that was kidnaped from westernshire?" he said. "Whats it like?"
"I wasn't kidnaped i ran away." Alana replyed not getting what he meant.
"I like that in you." he said "full of adventure and no consern about whats coming." Edward said.
"your suposed to be her boyfriend not mine!" she said. Although she did quite like thid Edward guy.
"But what if Sarah didn't know?" he asked shufling closer to her.
"Still no!" Alana said "She hates me enugh!"
"You don't realy CARE though, do you? Your old family will be back soon Linda called the police."
"Mabie…" said Alana who stoped talking because Edward had kissed her on the cheek. She reached down and grabed his hand. She knew it was wrong but it WAS the last thing on her list so she considered it OK rather than BAD. well, she would have done if Sarah hadn't spotted them.
"both of you GET OUT!" she said almost in tears again. Two times she had been separated be the SAME GIRL it was time for revenge and she knew egsacly how to get it!

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A girl who dreams that mabie one day i can finish a ............

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@ETCFG YES YES YES U NEED A SEQUAL TO THIS OTHERWISE IT WILL SEEM INCOMPLETE!!!! xx

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