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Eveline
Eveline โ€ข 28 followers

The thought of leaving this place I call home,

The thought of moving,
the thought of leaving everyone behind,

The thought of staying, the thought of decaying in this cottage I call home,

The thought is unthinkable, yet it's so very true, all the fighting and suffering,

It will not end 'till I take my leave, goodbye dearest family, great things I'll achieve,

The unthinkable thought will kill me in time, but for now I'll be fine,

The thought of leaving my dearest and friends, it has to be for everyone's good,

For I am a pain in everyone's eyes, there is no place for more goodbyes.

__________
Eveline xXx

#family-conflict #general #personal-journey #self-discovery
Eveline

@Eveline

I love writing sad/dark poetry and short stories. If you like my stuff, please like and follow. <3

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Comments & Feedback (14)

naaviie
naaviie
May 15, 2012 at 2:29 PM

Can totally relate, but hey, moving & change turned out to be one of the best things that ever happened to me. Good luck ๐Ÿ’š

Eveline
Eveline
May 15, 2012 at 2:40 PM

Thanks. :) The problem, though, is that I am 15 and might be forced to an institution for disordered girls my age, because of problems at home. :/

Eveline
Eveline
May 15, 2012 at 2:48 PM

@naaviie

Stablish
Stablish
May 15, 2012 at 4:41 PM

I have been impressed with your poetry, you have a great potential as a writer. Keep up the great, honest work.๐Ÿ˜Š

leelee101
leelee101
May 15, 2012 at 4:50 PM

@Eveline @Stablish indeed. Really nice piece ๐Ÿ˜Š

crowncottage
crowncottage
May 15, 2012 at 5:28 PM

Don't be too rash, I know the pain involved when someone you love leaves for ever. Perhaps you should give them a chance. You may be a pain but I'll bet they love you. Nice piece anyway!

crowncottage
crowncottage
May 15, 2012 at 5:29 PM

@Eveline

Eveline
Eveline
May 15, 2012 at 6:11 PM

@Stablish Aww, thank you so much, really? :D The poem is kinda true though, I might be forced to an institution for disordered girls my age. I cried today about it and wrote down my feelings through a poem.

Eveline
Eveline
May 15, 2012 at 6:11 PM

@leelee101 Thank you so much~! :)

Eveline
Eveline
May 15, 2012 at 7:12 PM

@crowncottage Heh, thank you, but it's me who's leaving, I might be forced to an institution for disordered girls my age.

crowncottage
crowncottage
May 15, 2012 at 7:17 PM

@Eveline yes, I knew it was you who was leaving but I thought you were choosing to go. If you are being forced to go, hopefully it might help you in the long run, at least you will get some support.

Eveline
Eveline
May 15, 2012 at 7:28 PM

@crowncottage Thank you for your concern. :) The thought of leaving home has been rough on me...

crowncottage
crowncottage
May 15, 2012 at 7:37 PM

@Eveline I am sure it has. Try to be strong and good luck for your future. โ˜€

Eveline
Eveline
May 15, 2012 at 7:48 PM

@crowncottage Thanks! <3

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