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How I Feel

Fly10
Fly10 • 425 followers

And how do you feel now?
Do I fill your mind every minute
Still?
Do you seek out a face
in the crowd
the same?
Well never the same exactly,
But
the mouth
So full
the eyes
So green
something that gives
you
just enough to work with
so that you can
Pretend
Replicate
her for me
the hair
Maybe?
that you can grip
as she arches
Beneath You

Or am I reduced
to the occasional
familiar scent
Filling your senses
and then
Do you inhale?
the way you used to
breathe me in
when you lay
beside me
around me
In Me

And this memory
hits me
So Hard
I'm breathing
artificially

Only with you
I did not imitate myself
Only with you
I asked for nothing.

#desire #emotional-landscape #general #intimate-poetry #memory
Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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Comments & Feedback (17)

Fly10
Fly10
May 5, 2012 at 11:09 PM

@Stablish. Just worked out the repost lark! Thanks for sharing 😊

PoppyA
PoppyA
May 5, 2012 at 11:10 PM

This is great, beautiful! :)

Stablish
Stablish
May 5, 2012 at 11:12 PM

@Fly10 Thats all good, I should have explained in hindsight😉 I normally repost something if I think it should be seen. Keep up the good work😊

Fly10
Fly10
May 5, 2012 at 11:12 PM

@PoppyA Thank you. One of those nights where the writing isn't flowing, but certain memories are. Seemed

Fly10
Fly10
May 5, 2012 at 11:13 PM

@PoppyA seemed the best thing was to just put

Fly10
Fly10
May 5, 2012 at 11:13 PM

Bloody send button! To just put them down on paper, was what I was trying to say😁

PoppyA
PoppyA
May 5, 2012 at 11:17 PM

@Fly10; haha, send buttons and autocorrect - damn you apple! Honestly though, awesome stuff :)

Fly10
Fly10
May 6, 2012 at 12:06 AM

@PoppyA Apple, qwerty jam, left handed(clumsy right hand next to Send)not conducive to the flow! Thanks for comment-appreciated😊

Fly10
Fly10
May 6, 2012 at 12:07 AM

@Stablish Appreciate it. Enjoying your alter ego on the Dark Side too😉

Stablish
Stablish
May 6, 2012 at 12:10 AM

@Fly10 Thanks, Im glad you like them, I've got a lighter one in progress will stay up until its done now.😊 look forward to more of your poems😊

Fly10
Fly10
May 6, 2012 at 12:21 AM

@Stablish I'm done for the night-anything written now I'd regret tomorrow. Good luck with next piece-look forward to reading it tomo 😉

ckahn
ckahn
May 6, 2012 at 2:44 PM

I really like this.

Fly10
Fly10
May 6, 2012 at 8:07 PM

@ckahn Thank you. One of those that hurts a little to write, but heals at the same time if you know what I mean?😞

leelee101
leelee101
May 19, 2012 at 5:51 PM

@Fly10 that's a beauty. You really are letting it all out hunny aren't you? Hope it's helping. XX

Fly10
Fly10
May 19, 2012 at 6:18 PM

@leelee101 Yeah, this one hurt a little, but I think overall, it's proven cathartic. There's plenty more on the subject that I could write, but have to be in the right frame of mind ie down while I put it together, & then high enough to pick myself up after its done! It's a fine balancing act 😌

Fly10
Fly10
May 19, 2012 at 6:18 PM

@leelee101 BIG thanks for repost😚 So glad you liked😉

naaviie
naaviie
May 19, 2012 at 6:34 PM

Beautiful 💚

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