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Needle In My Heart

This didn't actually happen!!

For the rest of my life,
My best friend had gone,
She'd been stabbed with a knife,
It was just wrong.

The day I'd been told about her death,
I just couldn't believe my ears,
It immediately took away my breath,
She'd been my best friend for many years.

I now had a huge hole in my heart,
And a needle in the middle,
It tore my bundle of hope apart,
I had solved love's riddle.

Georgiastar

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@LottiePenguin hope you like it 💜! Please like comment and RP!

I 💜 this

Awesome💜❤💜 I love all the rhyming and the way you placed the word into your poem!!

Thanks so much @LottiePenguin @bubblegum!

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